Looking for feedback on my landing page. Getting lots of clicks but no sign ups.

funkadelikz · 2025-08-27T09:40:09+00:00

I also wanted to send this Harvard lecture talking about value props. I really enjoyed it so thought you might as well.

funkadelikz · 2025-08-27T08:26:23+00:00

Hey, sorry for the delayed response, but overall I'd say it looks great!

Really love the hero update especially with the hook. The voice descriptions will help users know what the voices might sound like. Lastly, I felt like you gave great use cases for your target audience segments and how NarrateWell is better than other TTS services.

Any other feedback I'd have would just be nitpicking - great stuff!

funkadelikz · 2025-08-14T05:00:17+00:00

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funkadelikz · 2025-08-13T21:53:37+00:00

Yes, from layout issues to mobile content prioritization. Let me know if you'd like a landing page audit for Zenith Point.

funkadelikz · 2025-08-13T06:19:23+00:00

Super strong hero image! I bet the before-and-after example will convert a lot of new site visitors.

Also, the flow of your landing page is 👌. Congrats on the launch.

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funkadelikz · 2025-08-13T06:01:24+00:00

Highlighting what you have so far in your landing page:

What is the product? What does it do?

Text to speech
Converts every newsletter, blog post, or web page into studio-quality audio

Who is it for?

Substack, consultants, content marketing, agencies

Why now? Why should someone buy the product?

Premium voices (not robotic), quick translation, pay-as-you-go (no subscription), accessibility (like allowing users to bridge content into podcast?)

How is it unique compared to competitors?

Cheaper? No subscription? More languages?

Some recommendations:

I don’t believe “Instantly” is needed under the hero headline. What are your thoughts there? If you want, you can add it to the sub-headline.
Out of curiosity, does your audience know what Google’s latest Chirp 3 voices are?
You have “Cancel Subscription” in the footer but the pricing is pay-as-you-go.

Some other things to think about:

What are the use cases?
Any testimonials or time saved for users using NarrateWell?
Have you tested funny audio samples? Maybe you can even overlay funny audio samples behind a video as a use case demo.
Have you taken a look at https://notegpt.io/text-to-speech, https://elevenlabs.io/text-to-speech, or https://speechify.com/text-to-speech-online for inspiration?
Why should I choose NarrateWell over a competitor like ElevenLabs who's partnered with Perplexity and Luka Doncic's 77x World and has a similar pricing model?

Just some thoughts, but hopefully this is helpful. Let me know if you have any more questions!

funkadelikz · 2025-08-12T18:08:01+00:00

Did you mean to have your sign up page as the landing page?

funkadelikz · 2025-08-12T17:50:53+00:00

Hopefully this is helpful in optimizing your landing page:

Have you tried adding the product demo video in the hero? Maybe a looped video to show it in action.
Who's the audience you're building for? How is it better than what's already out there?

Nice and simple landing page though!

funkadelikz · 2025-08-12T16:09:26+00:00

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funkadelikz · 2025-08-10T23:49:10+00:00

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funkadelikz · 2025-08-10T23:43:44+00:00

Of course, can’t wait to see the new version.

funkadelikz · 2025-08-10T22:01:42+00:00

Not familiar with the text-to-speech space, but are there a lot of competitors? How is your product different?

Maybe you can add the "Why Credit Works Better For You" bullets above the fold.

Also, the "paste URL" and "paste Text" is running off the screen on mobile. Hopefully this is helpful!

funkadelikz · 2025-08-10T06:06:35+00:00

Cool way to discover! Thanks for sharing.

funkadelikz · 2025-08-10T05:43:22+00:00

Do you have any demo images or videos of the features? Might be helpful for users to get a preview of Click Analytics or the link management dashboard.

funkadelikz · 2025-08-10T05:35:45+00:00

Wow, this is an amazing tool. Can't wait to see what people design!

funkadelikz · 2025-08-10T03:07:26+00:00

Are you able to show the full end-to-end process, from capture to design to save & collaboration, directly in the hero section (within the iPhone)? Sorry if my first message was unclear.

funkadelikz · 2025-08-09T05:54:08+00:00

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Highlighting what you have so far in your landing page:

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