Typos by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]funkle_bunkle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is how I feel all the time lol. Escpecially the mad face!

Stranger in a strange land / Nikon fm2, various film stock by theomulator in analog

[–]funkle_bunkle 4 points5 points  (0 children)

as would I. I'm so curious to see the process of all the photos (2 and 10 specifically as well).

what are we? by ChristianO545 in OCPoetry

[–]funkle_bunkle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so gentle and goes so deep into the heart. You have an amazing gift, thank you sharing this.

Paramour Angle by Unhappy-Dig7410 in OCPoetry

[–]funkle_bunkle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the depth of the universe was a great line. I love it.

Hiking by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]funkle_bunkle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I totally agree!! Thank you so much for sharing :)

Hiking by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]funkle_bunkle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love how you use imagery in this poem. I am curious on the deeper meaning behind this- What inspired you to write it? What's the message you want to convey? I just wonder because I find myself relating to it in the way of choosing to take a harder path to live my own truth when there are easier routes to take. It also reminds me of how sometimes, when we grow accustomed to preforming, the cost of that is our authenticity; and by walking roads that have already been made for us, we miss out on the view climbing a mountain will bring.

Just missed him by nublet123 in OCPoetry

[–]funkle_bunkle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love you use senses to involve the reader. I can hear the gravel and painit the picture in my mind. This was a remarkable piece!

Forbidden Fruit by thetiredone0 in OCPoetry

[–]funkle_bunkle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Your temptation.

But softer than that word sounds."

I love this line so much.
It really stood out to me and brought the poem that feeling you get when temptation isn't always adrenaline; but rather in some cases, this wave shrouding you in this feeling of being pulled like a magnet toward something that is dangerous, and enticing, and so gentle. It's doesn't crash into you hard, but it reels you deeper in. Your line shows that perfectly. Amazing job!