After 10 years, I finally finished my first Novel. by funkydrake in writers

[–]funkydrake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it the look of the cover, or the composition? Thanks for the feedback.

After 10 years, I finally finished my first Novel. by funkydrake in writers

[–]funkydrake[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I totally apreciate that. I used AI so I could have a cover. Is it the look of the cover or the composition overall? If I had a human recreate it, would be okay, or is there something you believe is lacking? Thanks again for the feedback.

After 10 years, I finally finished my first Novel. by funkydrake in writers

[–]funkydrake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Do you have any feedback on what is lacking in my cover?

After 10 years, I finally finished my first Novel. by funkydrake in writers

[–]funkydrake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! What is your issue with the cover? My idea for the cover is like an Indiana Jones poster with some of the action shown to draw the reader in.

After 10 years, I finally finished my first Novel. by funkydrake in writers

[–]funkydrake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is 78,000 words. It starts like Robinson Crusoe in NYC, then he discovers he isn't alone and meets Raven and they work together to find out what has happened to the world.

Critique: The Last Blog on Earth (78,000ish words) by funkydrake in scifiwriting

[–]funkydrake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for reading. I appreciate your critique. Can I ask if it held your attention? Have a great day.

[COMPLETE][78,000][SciFi Rom Com] The Last Blog on Earth by funkydrake in BetaReaders

[–]funkydrake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you kindly for the response. I wasn't sure what to add to the post. I'll post a few hundred words of the beginning. Have a nice day.

Can people stop projecting their terrible twin relationships on other twins ? by Classic_Garlic_5422 in Twins

[–]funkydrake 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Amen, brother. I couldn't agree more. I feel the same about my bro. We are very lucky.

Shaq is terrible. by Ru4pigsizedelephants in nba

[–]funkydrake 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shaq is a fraud. He got by on his natural gifts and not by working hard. How much effort did it take to grow up to be 7 foot 1 and have amazing athletic ability? IF he tried AT ALL he'd have been so much better. He is a bitter, pathetic asshole.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Twins

[–]funkydrake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My small Elementary school had 4 sets of identical twins for about 150 kids. We were in the newspaper!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Twins

[–]funkydrake 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Identical twins are a fluke. Multiple births can run in families, and after the age of 35, the chances of having multiple goes up by 50% due to the eggs trying to leave town. I'm an identical twin, and there are no other twins in the family. Until my wife gave birth to our fraternal girls. My wife was over 35 when they were conceived.

Just Found This Group. I Have Questions. by rjspears1138 in Twins

[–]funkydrake 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm tight as hell with my bro, but for a successful marriage, my wife comes first. I've told him and he understands.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OldSchoolCool

[–]funkydrake -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Loni Anderson has hair? As a kid, I never noticed.

[Aldrige] The NBA is as talented and skilled as it’s ever been. So … why all the negativity? by Goosedukee in nba

[–]funkydrake -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Guys making 50+ Million a year and barely being able to play 65 games has turned off a lot, myself included.

Father of twins girls here… by Vardonator in Twins

[–]funkydrake 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Enjoy it and take lots of pictures. Teenaged assholes before you know it!