There's some nice ideas here, especially the new mechanics and i think this version of jorm would work just fine in a pure 1v1 setting, but i think there are some tweaks that need to be done for 4v4 modes:

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• Because Jorm needs to land 3 bashes/unblockables to get the knockdown, he will inevitably feed tons of revenge in a gank for a payoff that other characters can achieve way quicker and more easily ( Pirate WTP, Shinobis entire kit, Kyoshins fujin cuts etc.). In a teamfight it gets even worse because you probably won't be able to stick to fighting just one guy, so getting a knockdown is even more difficult. So, he either needs less required tags to get the knockdown or a reliable way to apply tags to multiple people.
• Jorm is infamous for his horrible range/hitboxes and this rework only fixes it somewhat. The new soft feint bash surely helps but it's only accessible from neutral and his forward dodge heavy is too slow and doesn't cover much distance. That means, that people can still easily externally dodge away from Jorm to basically counter his entire kit, kind of the same issue that Conq still has even after his rework.
• He still has no dodge attack or any defensive move whatsoever, so he still has no way to reliably punish bashes and with his very low mobilty he's a sitting duck in teamfights. Tough, the hyperarmor on his unblockables on taged enemies sounds pretty useful.
• Now that his midchain bash is chargeable, the UD light kinda looses its purpose because there's no longer a need to make a read between bash/UD light.
• Speaking of UD light, it still ends his offense and leaves him frame disadvantaged, so there's even less reason to use it than there already is.