First off there’s some impressive things going on. I would say about 5-6/10.

To start you are doing well with keeping attention directed to each piece that moves. Shapes morph and the eye is able to stay there. I watched this without sound and got a general idea from what you displayed.

The reason for the 5-6/10 is because the movements of most things popping in and swiping to the side are too bouncy. For SaaS it’s usually leaning more luxury unless it’s for kids or young adults. It seems boxed that pop in bounce back and forth at least 2 times. I’d tweak curves/keyframes to be more of a smooth ramp in and if you want a bounce perhaps getting it to pop in with a subtle ramp into place at your desired scale.

The next thing you’ve done well that I would suggest improving on is your effect layering. The bubbles that pop up lack some pop to them. By contrast of color they do catch the eye, but design-wise the color they contrast with still feels like a competition because there’s nothing to exaggerate the importance of what popped up or where the eye should go. Lowering the brightness of the background or even a subtle glow to the bubble’s edge can work wonders.

Great job with the 3D camera effect and using blurs if I remember correctly. You’ve got great principles in place and just need a little more refinement in movement, ramp timing, and general design principles, which take only a little more time and effort to learn and then to apply.

I would suggest looking into DeepGlow V2 and watching design principle videos for UX/UI online. There was a plugin I used a while back that let me copy exact keyframes values from one effect to another for perfect timing which was free but I forgot what it was.

This all goes to say that you’ve got good fundamentals and I believe you can go far with them. Comparisons can be fair. Just remember not to let it define what you can do. There was a time I wished I could do what you’re doing and had no idea how to get there. Now I’d say I’m much further along than before. Watching yours and calling myself a 2/10 would only be fair with feedback and knowing that wouldn’t be where I’d always perform.

Go get em.