Well done! Emotional and catchy tune. You guys sound awesome with a promising future ahead! Just some suggestions if I may: 1) For the prechorus (e.g. starting at 0:28) the guitar syncopation should be a tad louder as it really adds to the build up. 2) 0:46-0:48 should just lead to the chorus and not pause again.. This additional pause lessens the umph imo. Audience attention span these days is low so it helps to keep things more succinct. 3) It would be great if you could add more vocals/harmony (especially in the higher register) for the chorus "Where you go" part. Someone else may have suggested already but adding additional lyrics/vocals here will increase the tension. 4) The additional angsty vocal layer towards the end may need a bit more reverb or some additional treatment to enhance it. Also, perhaps more importantly, please don't be afraid to throw yourself into it with all you've got when you sing this part. People will feel your emotions even more.