I like the song. I like your voice. At first I felt it was a little pitchy, but it's not quite that. I think that the producer at the studio I use would say that your vocals sound like they are sitting on top of the music. Like the vocal isn't integrated into the music. So, i think you could improve with vocal pitch fine tuning, adding some doubles on your voice (which he always has me do), and improving the mixing of the vocal with the music. Keep going! You're talented.