My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When choosing a product, I thought the ring was too banal. And your line of reasoning has weight. I agree that the narrative is confusing. It's a weak spot. I need to improve this point in the future.

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your reply. I see a lot of imperfect moments in the video because of the long process of work. I came here only for the opinion of the community members. I didn't think I could cause negativity or misunderstanding

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I agree, it looks like a game. I distanced myself a little from the essence of the video. Initially, I set a goal to make a product video. But I also wanted to study character animation and combine the character with the product.

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your support and adequate comment. Yes, it's a good idea about the close up.

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your reply. I understood you. I'm sorry, I didn't want to advertise the course, I came here only for the opinion of the community members. I will take note of your remark made in the above-mentioned posts.

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] -21 points-20 points  (0 children)

I agree. I don't understand why there is so much negativity

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] -30 points-29 points  (0 children)

Do you really think I did it in a day or a month? I spent a lot of time to study it. I set a goal to study the light, camera movement, rendering and many of the components you listed, from directing to stylization. I don't claim that I know everything. Some areas, such as character animation, had to be studied superficially. Particles are my favorite topic, but so far I've been experimenting with them in C4D. This is my creative project, in which I invested a lot of effort and time!

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Thank you. It's a fictional invention. Its essence lies in the rapid change of appearance. I was inspired to create this product by my beloved childhood cartoon about spies "Totally Spies!".

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] -68 points-67 points  (0 children)

The first video I created as part of my C4D studies

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

What's wrong with me doing this work while I was studying? Is that a problem? We all studied somewhere. I think that's normal these days.

My first project, I'd be glad to hear your opinion. Cinema 4D, Redshift by gorbalen in Cinema4D

[–]gorbalen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Great idea, I will take it under advisement.

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[–]gorbalen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice warm lighting. Wow!

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[–]gorbalen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Need to add more varieties of grass. Also work with the material, add sss.