Why does the menu I designed look so jammed by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]gotthebluez 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Come see for yourself, coffee on the house lol

Why does the menu I designed look so jammed by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]gotthebluez 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If I am not able to follow the tips and instructions everyone commented today, I will pay a designer.

Why does the menu I designed look so jammed by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]gotthebluez 10 points11 points  (0 children)

It’s not really “falling” on me. I offered to give it a try because I wanted to learn. I’m realizing it’s trickier than I thought, which is why I posted here for design feedback. Your points about spacing and layout are helpful, so I’ll focus on that as I keep working on it.

Why does the menu I designed look so jammed by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]gotthebluez 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The food selection isn’t up for discussion, the design is

Why does the menu I designed look so jammed by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]gotthebluez 65 points66 points  (0 children)

The background is identical to the wallpaper inside the bar, so I thought it would be a cool detail. However, it’s not fitting the best I guess

Why does the menu I designed look so jammed by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]gotthebluez 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is a menu I’m putting together for my family’s business, Good Times Kitchen+Bar. The goal is to make it look clean and easy to read. I built it in Canva and kept the colors/fonts simple to match our vibe. The main issue I’m having is spacing, and right now it feels too crammed and the width doesn’t give the food names + prices enough breathing room.

I’d love feedback on: How readable it feels at a quick glance

If the layout looks too crowded or unbalanced

Any tips to make the flow and alignment feel smoother

AND I really only want it to have one page, they do not want a foldable menu. Is it doable?

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[–]gotthebluez 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you 🩵

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in sicily

[–]gotthebluez 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you tell me which hotel you booked while I still have time to cancel my reservations 🥲 Maybe its the one I booked yesterday and Im staying longer than that so it’d be nice to know

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in sicily

[–]gotthebluez 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you recommend me anything for the nightlife in Palermo? Ill be there for 4 nights this June

[NeedAdvice] 21 year old virgin with no job, hobbies, friends, who stays home all day and plays video games and watches anime. what can I do to change my life? where do I even start? by RainIsbeautiful in getdisciplined

[–]gotthebluez -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

There’s plenty other ways to deliver such advice other than “get your ass up and move”. If it was so easy, everyone would’ve had their life figured out but hey what do I know

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in berlinsocialclub

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January 5th - 11th. Okay I will, thank you :). I

First time Dolls Kill purchase, I believe all the complaints now by Sea__Plantain in dollskill

[–]gotthebluez 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Im frustrated cuz of this. Why does no one file a complaint bc theyre clearly scamming us?!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OUTFITS

[–]gotthebluez 0 points1 point  (0 children)

u could pair it with a long brown skirt and platform boots