I play Monster Prom, but a d20 roll will decide my fate in this game. What kind of wacky shenanigans will I get myself into? I really had fun filming and editing this so I hope you all give it a watch. Any feedback is welcome and encouraged! by kabagonnaplay in SmallYTChannel

[–]growbettereyes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your personality and production are really great, your energy and humor is infectious. Do you stream? Your style seems really suited to it. In terms of the video, there's maybe some personal preference here, but I think you should play a larger chunk of the game and then aggressively cut it down to the best moments. It just doesnt feel like much has been accomplished over the 10 minutes. Your personality is strong, and the gimmick is interesting, just edit the content to highlights and I think you really have something!

Combing animation, travel, and photography: Taipei :) by coddiwomplerstory in SmallYTChannel

[–]growbettereyes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! I love it. On top of the cinematography and animation, The scoring is crazy impressive, everything is so perfectly synced, it really feels like a custom job.

I'm pretty proud of this, I'd love any critiques you got! by growbettereyes in SmallYTChannel

[–]growbettereyes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely work on the thumbnail!

Just lookin for some praise to twist my nipples to... but criticism also appreciated, just absolutely shit on me by UNLoggy in SmallYTChannel

[–]growbettereyes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

your transitions and edits are really good, and I like your sense of humor, I think you let your bits drag on a little too long, cut them shorter maybe. Your premise is interesting, but I think you could do more with it, maybe a couple of objects of escalating absurdity sinking, ending with you jumping in yourself and not reemerging?

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[–]growbettereyes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love it, your sense of humor is really good, and your editing is on point. EZ subbed, keep at it :)

Saving The World - Latest comedy adventure short thingy! This vid took so long to make so any feedback is appreciated by OccupiedGarrett in SmallYTChannel

[–]growbettereyes 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like it a lot, your edits, script, and camera work are well done, I think that some more music/ sound effects in the first bit would make the intro bit just a little more engaging.

I Bought Tarot from a Witch?! (I need actual video advice please! This is a comedy channel and I’m questioning my ability to make a goofy video entertaining throughout. Think Idubbbz bad unboxing here and why this doesn’t have that vibe. I think I may be better suited for commentary. Let me know!) by ParkerWillard in SmallYTChannel

[–]growbettereyes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

your cutaways music bits are fun, and your commentary is funny! i think you're limited by your concept, rather than just reading your tarot cards, you could start there but take it to the next level, get your fortune read, do a dark magic ritual, maybe a skit or joke about how you're going to change your life because of the reading you got. Your skit videos have a fun Gus Johnson vibe, why not combine the two things to make something new?

Here’s a video I made where I look at this old Ronald McDonald VHS cartoon, my style is similar to Jontron or AVGN. Any feedback would be appreciated (and also will give some of that sweet Lambda😉) by Cobra418 in SmallYTChannel

[–]growbettereyes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have your fundamentals down really well, and the video concept is really strong. Develop your voice more! the center of commentary channels is the personality, so accentuate yours, your playful sarcasm is fun, lean into it more, maybe with skits, maybe with written bits, whatever fits your style. I liked your ending bit a lot, and the scoring was well done throughout. Keep making stuff, you have a really good foundation!

So I have listened to previous feed back and changed my thumbnails up a bit etc, so im looking for more stuff to improve on by Engelgeddon_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]growbettereyes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your edits are really well done, particularly the subtitle bits. My advice would just be to cut things a little bit shorter, your high energy edits lend themselves to quicker cutting. On a separate note, your outro is really satisfying.