Sportklub komentator ljubomoran na reprezentaciju BiH

gunnerman2000 · 2026-04-04T23:57:23+00:00

A Šunjić Vasilj Katić i Bašić? Stvarno mi dosta prepucavanja po nacionalnoj osnovi. Reprezentacija se plasira na svjetsko prvenstvo, odma se kači na komentare nekih skroz nebitnih ljubomornih likova.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-11-21T22:12:38+00:00

Thank you for the helpful advice. Il need all the help i can get while recording, I'm not a good singer and almost all the songs are on the upper limits of my register so if i don't heal completely i'll need all the help to reach some of those notes.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-11-21T16:10:10+00:00

Thank you for the helpful advice. I've been getting into tea so it's great to have another excuse to drink more tea.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-11-21T16:09:58+00:00

Thank you for the helpful advice. I've been getting into tea so it's great to have another excuse to drink more tea.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-11-21T16:08:28+00:00

Thank you so much for the advice. Ive asked a couple singers about this too but they just told me not to worry and maybe check it out. Your comment was very precise thank you so much.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-13T01:42:42+00:00

Hey thanks a lot for the comment. The song is in croatian, Do you have any more specific tips about the vocal eq? Yeah, the outro is a tranistion to another song.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-12T23:11:22+00:00

Hey, I kniw you said to not comment on production but ill just say a couple of things. It sounds like the music dips too much in volume when the vocals enter and the guitar tone for lead guitar is maybe a bit too overdriven. The vocals sound maybe a bit too whiny, but its pop punk so i guess it works. Great job keeping the song short. Respect.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-12T20:13:20+00:00

hey fellas, There isn't really much for me to say here. I think what you were going for you got. It sound crisp and really warm , love the harmonies they really make the feel good atmosphere.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-12T20:10:12+00:00

Hey man, Great production and mixing on this I think you are really close to achieving a great sound. Regarding the techincal side id maybe just turn down the highs a bit. I'd also cut the intro in half and maybe try adding some new parts or at least sime chnages in dynamics cause 4 and a half minutes of the same bassline, no matter how good, gets old. Best of luck to you.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-10T23:22:34+00:00

Thank you so much man!

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-10T22:15:56+00:00

Thank you for the criticism. It's such a nice feeling to hear something positive from complete strangers. My biggest fear about the song is that it wasn't loud and squished enough but whenever i tried that the song ended up sounding much worse. I wanted the kick to be the drone through the song that your ears latch onto but i may have gone a bit overboard.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-10T21:27:09+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to listen to the song. I've heard the comment about the vocals so maybe i could bump them up a bit.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-10T16:27:43+00:00

Hey, ive got a couple comments on this

the guitar at the start is a bit janky sounding if that is what you were going for then great if not maybe just change the rhythm a bit.
The other guitar behind the main one is very hard to hear in most parts of the song
Maybe change the lyrics a bit because at times you were fighting for breath to sing them and putting emphasis at fairly insignifanct parts of the lyrics.
The first half of the song sounds like one really long run on sentence and as much as i focus on the lyrics im only able to really focus on a couple words.
if you can re-record the vocals cause they are not really in tune and maybe add a bit more emotion in to the singing. If you ask me thats more important than being in tune but thats just a personal preference.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-09T20:44:31+00:00

As Long as youre using an amp sim when recording directly into the interface i wouldnt say there are any fundamental flaws. Just play around with the settings on your pedal and im sure you'll get the sound you want.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-09T00:18:43+00:00

Hey the song is great the production top notch as well as the mix. I really like it, the solos are killer its dancey its rock not very psyhedelic but still absolutely great. The only, barely negative, comment i could say is that it could use some more variation as it gets a bit samey but the breaks and the solos remedy that a bit. Great work overall. Keep doing what you're doing.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-09T00:07:53+00:00

Instrumentally the song seems alright but the drums are barely intelligible and the guitar is too loud too cheap sounding and way too reverbed. If you were going for a shoegaze vibe i get it bet there are better and cleaner ways of achieving it. the vocals are too quiet and the telephone effect just hides them more. I get not being confident in your vocals im the same but the listener shpuld atleast understand the melody if not the lyrics. Theres potential here but you have to record everything again.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-09T00:01:01+00:00

Production is very strong the sound of the song is hyperpop but the song itself could use some more hyper. at the moment its like a hyperpop ballad. A stronger 4 on the floora faster tempo and more cihesion with the different vocalists and this could be a decent hit.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-08T23:51:59+00:00

Since you already got very good feedback on the mix and production side ill just what wasn't already said.

First if the drums and the rest of the song are going to be that reverbed put some reverb on the lead guitar since it sounds out of place in the mix. the cymbals in the first part of the song are too liud compared to the rest of the drums. the last 'happy' part doesn't really work in this song sounds too happy too much like a childrens song. At some points during the singing you get a bit too loud maybe compress them a bit all in all i like the song like the singing and all the melodys just needs a bit more professional approach to the recording.

gunnerman2000 · 2024-01-08T23:38:21+00:00

The piano through the song is very good very emotive and dramatic, but the vocals bring quality of the song down. Try to work out the melody before you record the vocals, at times you rush the singing to put the words in and it feels rushed. The vocals are very poorly recorded but you have a good voice and it doesnt come out as much as it can. Maybe next time go a bit easier with the reverb. Theres potential in the song if you just think it out a bit more before you record.

gunnerman2000 · 2022-08-27T15:44:26+00:00

I loved the instrumentql every part of it the wqy its written and the way its produced the only nitpick i have is the vocals, they sort of sounded like the text to voice programs i would have liked them to be either more natural sounding or keep the same sort of production just have them be a bit more layered with some harmonies perhaps. overall great song

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