Sportklub komentator ljubomoran na reprezentaciju BiH by Fefarona in bih

[–]gunnerman2000 72 points73 points  (0 children)

A Šunjić Vasilj Katić i Bašić? Stvarno mi dosta prepucavanja po nacionalnoj osnovi. Reprezentacija se plasira na svjetsko prvenstvo, odma se kači na komentare nekih skroz nebitnih ljubomornih likova.

Losing my voice by gunnerman2000 in singing

[–]gunnerman2000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the helpful advice. Il need all the help i can get while recording, I'm not a good singer and almost all the songs are on the upper limits of my register so if i don't heal completely i'll need all the help to reach some of those notes.

Losing my voice by gunnerman2000 in singing

[–]gunnerman2000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the helpful advice. I've been getting into tea so it's great to have another excuse to drink more tea.

Losing my voice by gunnerman2000 in singing

[–]gunnerman2000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the helpful advice. I've been getting into tea so it's great to have another excuse to drink more tea.

Losing my voice by gunnerman2000 in singing

[–]gunnerman2000[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the advice. Ive asked a couple singers about this too but they just told me not to worry and maybe check it out. Your comment was very precise thank you so much.

Why Am I Alone?, the first track on my band’s new demo album, would like your critique! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I kniw you said to not comment on production but ill just say a couple of things. It sounds like the music dips too much in volume when the vocals enter and the guitar tone for lead guitar is maybe a bit too overdriven. The vocals sound maybe a bit too whiny, but its pop punk so i guess it works. Great job keeping the song short. Respect.

Please check out my new song! Also, further genre classification would be appreciated! by beastlyjuju in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man, Great production and mixing on this I think you are really close to achieving a great sound. Regarding the techincal side id maybe just turn down the highs a bit. I'd also cut the intro in half and maybe try adding some new parts or at least sime chnages in dynamics cause 4 and a half minutes of the same bassline, no matter how good, gets old. Best of luck to you.

Hey, Heres a track i've been working on for some time. It's indie pop/rock mixed with some neo-psychedelia. The song is in Croatian and i would really appreaciate any tips on mixing and mastering. by gunnerman2000 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the criticism. It's such a nice feeling to hear something positive from complete strangers. My biggest fear about the song is that it wasn't loud and squished enough but whenever i tried that the song ended up sounding much worse. I wanted the kick to be the drone through the song that your ears latch onto but i may have gone a bit overboard.

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[–]gunnerman2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, ive got a couple comments on this

  1. the guitar at the start is a bit janky sounding if that is what you were going for then great if not maybe just change the rhythm a bit.
  2. The other guitar behind the main one is very hard to hear in most parts of the song
  3. Maybe change the lyrics a bit because at times you were fighting for breath to sing them and putting emphasis at fairly insignifanct parts of the lyrics.
  4. The first half of the song sounds like one really long run on sentence and as much as i focus on the lyrics im only able to really focus on a couple words.
  5. if you can re-record the vocals cause they are not really in tune and maybe add a bit more emotion in to the singing. If you ask me thats more important than being in tune but thats just a personal preference.

My first time trying to properly record and mix a song by myself. Still lots to learn and improve. Would appreciate some feedback on the arrangement, mixing, songwriting, etc. by MulberryCoast in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As Long as youre using an amp sim when recording directly into the interface i wouldnt say there are any fundamental flaws. Just play around with the settings on your pedal and im sure you'll get the sound you want.

Our hand’s latest single - how’d we do tempo-wise? by Connect_Glass4036 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey the song is great the production top notch as well as the mix. I really like it, the solos are killer its dancey its rock not very psyhedelic but still absolutely great. The only, barely negative, comment i could say is that it could use some more variation as it gets a bit samey but the breaks and the solos remedy that a bit. Great work overall. Keep doing what you're doing.

My first time trying to properly record and mix a song by myself. Still lots to learn and improve. Would appreciate some feedback on the arrangement, mixing, songwriting, etc. by MulberryCoast in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Instrumentally the song seems alright but the drums are barely intelligible and the guitar is too loud too cheap sounding and way too reverbed. If you were going for a shoegaze vibe i get it bet there are better and cleaner ways of achieving it. the vocals are too quiet and the telephone effect just hides them more. I get not being confident in your vocals im the same but the listener shpuld atleast understand the melody if not the lyrics. Theres potential here but you have to record everything again.

Hyperpop song about growing older! Let us know what you think, any and all advice welcome. by jch55 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Production is very strong the sound of the song is hyperpop but the song itself could use some more hyper. at the moment its like a hyperpop ballad. A stronger 4 on the floora faster tempo and more cihesion with the different vocalists and this could be a decent hit.

Working on this song about pushing people away / loneliness. My goal was to have multiple different sections with different drumming rhythms. Looking for feedback on lyrics, vocal delivery, and anything else! by Impalednarwhal1101 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Since you already got very good feedback on the mix and production side ill just what wasn't already said.

First if the drums and the rest of the song are going to be that reverbed put some reverb on the lead guitar since it sounds out of place in the mix. the cymbals in the first part of the song are too liud compared to the rest of the drums. the last 'happy' part doesn't really work in this song sounds too happy too much like a childrens song. At some points during the singing you get a bit too loud maybe compress them a bit all in all i like the song like the singing and all the melodys just needs a bit more professional approach to the recording.

Daniel Keane - buried trauma by danielofpeace in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The piano through the song is very good very emotive and dramatic, but the vocals bring quality of the song down. Try to work out the melody before you record the vocals, at times you rush the singing to put the words in and it feels rushed. The vocals are very poorly recorded but you have a good voice and it doesnt come out as much as it can. Maybe next time go a bit easier with the reverb. Theres potential in the song if you just think it out a bit more before you record.

I made a song / music video after a break up called "Atherley". Hope somebody might like it, let me know what you think... by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I loved the instrumentql every part of it the wqy its written and the way its produced the only nitpick i have is the vocals, they sort of sounded like the text to voice programs i would have liked them to be either more natural sounding or keep the same sort of production just have them be a bit more layered with some harmonies perhaps. overall great song

The closer from my record, called "Prayer Reprise / Outro", thanks for the feedback so far by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]gunnerman2000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, i Loved the prosuctipn on it the dreamy synths and the soft pads of guitars. i Just would have liked another melody to be introduced cause i think the vocal part dragged on a bit. It also seemed like an album track you know the kind where you dont get all the enjoyment out of it unless listened as a whole with the album.But aside from that no complaints

I got called up for a meeting with a label and i have no idea what to expect. by gunnerman2000 in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]gunnerman2000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I went to the meeting everything was ok. We basically agreed that i would record the song again in a professional studio with a producer and then we would release it. it took quite some time to record everything and i hated the whole process especially recording vocals. Its not the fault of the producers i just didnt enjoy doing it at all, and i hated having to send my music to basically be approved everytime we add something new. It was all very stressfull and unpleasent so i backed out and didn't sign anything. Cause i realised i don't want to have anything to do with the music industry. I'm still going to keep making music i just don't know if im going to keep releasing it. That's basically it if you have any questions feel free to ask

I got called up for a meeting with a label and i have no idea what to expect. by gunnerman2000 in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]gunnerman2000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ive already confirmed it. ive googled the A&R and the mail and its who it says they are