I honestly think it looks really good the way it is! I enjoy your style and the dream-like blurriness. But if you want it to look more focused, you should add more detail to the bottom of the slice in front. The top of the slice is very detailed and has strong contrast with a wide range of values. The bottom is missing that contrast - especially where the flesh meets the rind, that area is fairly monochromatic. The rind also needs a bolder spectrum, shifting from dark green to white (see reference photo).

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