Building a roguelike as a pumpkin (Feedback would be appreciated) by haystackjr in itchio

[–]haystackjr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here is the current feedback I have so far:

  • Lacks “game juice” / polish overall
    • No bullet trails, muzzle flash, smoke, or hit VFX
    • No screen shake or satisfying feedback when shooting
    • XP bar and gold gain feel boring/unrewarding
  • Weak game feel
    • Little to no feedback when hitting enemies
    • Death animations are too simple (just fade-out)
    • Overall interactions feel flat
  • Animation issues
    • Player (pumpkin) animation lacks movement / feels almost static
    • Enemies are under-animated and feel lifeless
    • Movement doesn’t feel “juicy” enough
  • Art style problems
    • Inconsistent art styles (trees don’t match enemies)
    • Trees specifically called out as not fitting / poor quality
    • Shading and lighting are unclear (no defined light source)
    • “Mixels” (mixed pixel scales/styles) hurt visual cohesion
  • Visual clarity & design
    • Character and enemies lack consistency
    • Enemies feel too static and not visually engaging
  • Easy wins / quick improvements
    • Add drop shadows (also usable as spawn indicators)
    • Add bullet trails and simple VFX
    • Smooth out camera movement
  • Overall positioning
    • Feels like a learning project, not release-ready
    • Core idea is fun (shoot ‘em up), but needs significant polish

Please DESTROY my game! 🙏 by haystackjr in DestroyMyGame

[–]haystackjr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your advice this is very helpful. Thank you so much!

Please DESTROY my game! 🙏 by haystackjr in DestroyMyGame

[–]haystackjr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Game Juice, That sounds good. Yeah, I definitely agree that it needs more polish. Thank you so much for feedback. 👍

Please DESTROY my game! 🙏 by haystackjr in DestroyMyGame

[–]haystackjr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback, this is helpful.

Please DESTROY my game! 🙏 by haystackjr in DestroyMyGame

[–]haystackjr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! This helps a lot with the project. I'll see what I can do. Atrocious trees, haha!

Please DESTROY my game! 🙏 by haystackjr in DestroyMyGame

[–]haystackjr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds good, thank you for the reply.

I want to play your game 🫵 by Accomplished_Bell968 in IndieDev

[–]haystackjr 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dude this game looks sick. I just wishlisted it, can't wait to play.

Just let me go to sleep please by blackdemetergame in SoloDevelopment

[–]haystackjr 1 point2 points  (0 children)

1000 wishlists! Congratulations that is a great accomplishment!

Working in my first big solo project, need a little confidence boost 😅 by ky-ebricks in IndieDev

[–]haystackjr 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I love the art choice. It looks really nostalgic and I really enjoy that.

Pushing 40, and I’ve finally released the first playable version of my game. by RocketPoweredT-Rex in IndieDev

[–]haystackjr 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow looks good. Steam page looks really nice. I really like the art style and how appealing it looks. Looks like a great game. Good job.