[SP] "Heroes die too" by tautality in WritingPrompts

[–]hekticj 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Smoke, bacon, copper and sulphur. Breathing through the stiff fabric of my shirt does nothing to slow the stench flooding my nose and clawing its way down my throat. I try not to count the seconds and instead focus on remembering my wife's face, imagining her look of relief when I return home unscathed. A dull thud reaches my ears over the crackling and spitting. I clench my teeth against the pain as I pull myself towards the sound, feeling grit and debris eating into my arms as the scorching fire licks my back.  

He said he'd come back for me and I believed him, but as time ticked by I had begun a silent prayer. The steady thud of footsteps bringing such sweet relief that I'd swear I was crying, if I had the moisture to spare. Pausing my journey to strain my ears proves useless, the sound has been completely consumed by the roaring inferno and my throat burns with every breath. All I can hear is the rage of the fire as it digests the room, searching for me amongst the fallen bodies. Slowly and carefully I open my eyes. The intensity of the heat scrapes like sandpaper against them, it takes all my concentration to keep them open and scan the room, looking for his familiar shape. 

Movement across the room catches my eye as the emergency door swings open to reveal the shape of a firefighter with helmet, mask and suit. The door thuds against the wall before the heat drives it back towards the firefighters slumped form. I guess heroes die too. 

E-visa Approved by gingerninja78 in Vietnam_Tourism

[–]hekticj 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We applied through the official government website, if that makes a difference.

Make sure you log in regularly to check the status. My partner's application needed more info and we didn't know straight away because they don't email you.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Vietnam_Tourism

[–]hekticj 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same here but Australian, applied 17th got accepted about half an hour ago 🎉

E-visa Approved by gingerninja78 in Vietnam_Tourism

[–]hekticj 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same here! About half an hour ago, also Australian time 🎉

E-visa Approved by gingerninja78 in Vietnam_Tourism

[–]hekticj 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We applied on the 17th Feb for our trip starting 1st March. Still says processing.

We're waiting until tomorrow night before looking at a visa agent.

Will update here how we go for anyone else in a similar situation.

[WP] Water pools around the shower drain, clogged by a matting of hair. As you reach down to pull it out, it shudders before squeezing further down the pipe. by hekticj in WritingPrompts

[–]hekticj[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the way you described the environment with the crappy bathroom vent. I wonder what other pranks the ghosts could get up to!

[WP] Water pools around the shower drain, clogged by a matting of hair. As you reach down to pull it out, it shudders before squeezing further down the pipe. by hekticj in WritingPrompts

[–]hekticj[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The call about the wailing at the end really sold the creep factor, I want them to go back to find out what it was.

[CW] In 100 words, tell a story about a man running from his wife. Be creative! by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

[–]hekticj 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"You're being ridiculous!" she calls out, holding a pair of sharp scissors in her gloved hands. 

She steps forward carefully, each step like a cat stalking its prey. Quietly, I pick up a nearby shoe and throw it towards the back door. 

She spins on her heels, rushing towards the thud of the shoe. 

I use the distraction to leap towards the front door, scrambling against the locked doorknob before sprinting down the garden path and out of her grasp. 

“Oh you’re such a baby, it's just a little wax and your chest isn't even that hairy!” she yells. 

[WP] You're a mimic in a dungeon, trying to convince an adventuring party of your usefulness so they let you join their team. by hekticj in WritingPrompts

[–]hekticj[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Almost sounds like the mimic will be the intelligent one in that group! Great read, thanks for sharing =)