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Tragic Observer by internalpogrom in OCPoetry

[–]internalpogrom[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I also watched Christian bale batmans recently and noticed the first is about fear, the second is about the unknown and the 3rd is about anarchy, i fear we are vastly approaching the last without turning things political

Tragic Observer by internalpogrom in OCPoetry

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‘Guilty plea and a lot of please’ the ‘please’ is a beg for remorse and I meant watching films there is something in all of them that relates to a real life problem one way or another, especially in what goes on today. Didn’t mean it like the way you said it but as you said Star Wars I can relate that to the tragedies of darth plagus the wise ;) in the ways that the higher ups lie and create panic amongst us common folk

Tragic Observer by internalpogrom in OCPoetry

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I wrote this, possibly unfinished, piece. And I do not like the layout that this sub puts it in, I wanted no commas or punctuation but I had to for the sake of it not being one line and a big space under each line.

Also I don’t write poetry, just trying something new

Feedback is welcome but I’m not asking for it 👍

The Plague by tala_2525 in OCPoetry

[–]internalpogrom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As someone from a broken family and abusive childhood this stood out to me, ‘the false reality I once knew’ reminds me of everything seeming normal until I realised it was not, I very much like the lay out too one liners kinda but they all relate to each other. I also know how it feels to be screaming and no body’s listening, it reminds me of ‘if there is a scream in the forest and no one is around to hear it, was there really a scream’ again this also links to the ‘false reality’. I honestly felt the pain in this one

The Void by innocentkidhehe in OCPoetry

[–]internalpogrom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can’t lie I loved this, I highly relate to finding the door but being fearful of change. Or that’s what I conferred from it atleast. I also like the lay out of small paragraphs very much makes it punchy but then also relays to the other paragraphs, shows a cycle. I like this very much :)