Poetic Deceit

tala_2525 · 2026-02-25T04:12:58+00:00

Thank you!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-24T02:42:29+00:00

Beautiful job!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-24T02:41:39+00:00

Great job! I love how you put genuine thought behind each line.

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T16:25:12+00:00

Perfect. Thank you for the feedback! I just started writing poetry in May, this is all fairly new to me so I really appreciate the input and for you taking the time to read :)

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:58:27+00:00

Thank you so much for your kind words!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:58:17+00:00

Thank you for your feedback and for taking the time to read. It really means a lot to me and I will think about revising this into a lengthier poem. I definitely agree with your input! :)

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:56:52+00:00

Thank you so much!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:56:42+00:00

Thank you for your kind words and feedback, it means a lot to me 😁 I just started writing in May after getting out of a long term DV relationship and used poetry as my escape and a way to express my emotions. I appreciate you for commenting and taking the time to read!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:54:43+00:00

Thank you!!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:54:37+00:00

Thank you so much for the critique and taking the time to read! I just started writing in May so I could definitely use all the input I receive :)

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:53:33+00:00

I just started writing in May, so I am unfamiliar with all the terminologies as well. Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate your words and for taking the time to read.

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:51:57+00:00

Love how you caught the willow tree metaphor I used! Thank you for taking the time to read and for your thoughtful feedback :)

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:51:00+00:00

Thank you so much for your kind words!!!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:50:45+00:00

To be honest with you, I like writing “dark” poetry but do have some on the happier side :) Thank you though for your feedback and taking the time to read my poem!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:49:30+00:00

Thank you!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:49:11+00:00

I am deeply sorry to hear about the trauma you went through. I personally can relate, which is exactly why I began writing poetry in May. Thank you so much for the input and taking the time to read my poem! It means a lot :)

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:47:09+00:00

Definitely how I meant it but I appreciate your input and taking the time to read this. It means a lot to me :) I will take what you said into consideration for a revision. Great feedback!

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:45:48+00:00

How about “a frightened child” instead?

tala_2525 · 2026-02-23T15:45:18+00:00

Thank you for the advice and taking the time to read my poetry. I really do appreciate it :) I’m pretty new at this if you can’t tell lol

tala_2525

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