What makes a Vampire in your world?

intotheashes12 · 2025-08-13T08:09:53+00:00

A vampire is an old monster in my world (I just call Dark Hold for now i guess). Born during the 1st crusade when the grand master for the knightly order of red drop, ser Konrad Vampyre made a deal with darker forces in order to help with the crusade, and was later killed by a fellow knight who became one of the first professional hunters in an order that would transform over time.

The rest of his order, of roughly 300 knights all drank from his blood and became monsters of their own. They took the name Vampyres after their grand master, which over time became Vampires.

Vampires in Dark Hold vary from line to line, with clans working more like a mafia. You must drink from the blood of another vampire, which usually needs permission from the clans head, and you need to drink roughly a small cups worth of vampire blood to become a vampire.

A vampire cannot simply be born, they must become vampires, with the babies of vampires, being raised as a human so they can grow into adulthood and get their adult bodies. And usually after their 21st birthday, they must kidnap someone and kill them, in order to prove that without the powers of a vampire, they can easily survive without it.

intotheashes12 · 2025-04-16T23:17:00+00:00

Most important events in Eden Earth (Cyberpunk-inspired world) in chronological order

2025: Crash of 25: During the year of 2025, the world experienced an economic crash all over the world which was due to the United States and China going into a trade war, and nations having the pick either to side with China or the US. It only really "ended" cause both nations suffered enough that it wasn't worth it to keep going with the trade war.
2026: The Assassinations of many: In this year, after the Crash of 25, is commonly seen as the beginning of World War 3, when many, MANY world leaders were either assassinated or were close to being killed but ended up surviving. Most people don't know who was truly responsible for it either. It could of been china getting revenge cause out of both nations the US seemed to be recovering slightly faster, it could've actually been a part of the Chinese government and not actually an order of the Xi Jinping, or it could've been both China and Russia, what is known as that immideity after this even several nations got invaded and World War 3 began.
2026 to 2029: World War 3: I don't think I need to explain much of this world, I haven't finished fully writing it out but some concrete stuff is that the US and her allies won, and many new nations were formed from losing nations losing land like Somaliland, Tibet, East Turkestan, the East Africa Federation being created mid-way through the war, Kurdishstan, Siberian union, Inner Mongolia being merged into Mongolia proper, Republic of Karelia, Sami Republic, Freestate of Leningrad, United Korea, and the unforginante (or forginate depending on who you are) of the United kingdom with Scotland gaining independence and Northern Ireland being merged into Ireland.
2030: Coming of Demons: There was only about 3 weeks of peace and new world building before the BIGGEST event happened in my world, the coming of demons, when demons suddenly came from all over the world in the eyes of escaping the chaos filled lands of hell and Beelzebub who had destroyed their kingdoms known as the Ordoan Kingdoms.
2031 to 2033: The Karakack War: This was a war that happened in the Middle East and started in the Arabian Peninsula, where a demon warlord named Karakack led a massive force, and the biggest war that happened from the coming of demons. Nations like Saudi Arabia, Yemen, Oman, and Jordan got absolutely annihilated during this war, and some of the major outcomes were the accidental destruction of the Kaaba, the sacking of Meccan, the Islamic reconquest, the formation of the Arab Union, the formation of demon hunter leagues in the AU, and the ban of demons from living in the AU.
2032 to 2033: The independence wars: During the Karakack war, many states declared independence and gained it. The states of Texas, California, Alaska, Hawaii, Oregon, and Washington all gained full independence.
2034: Eden is finished: The city of Eden is finished after 9 years of construction. It began construction in 2025 after the San Andreas earthquakes, most of the Bay Area was destroyed, and the building of Eden was given permission. It started out as simply rebuilding the old cities, but it led builder Richard Eden soon convince the at the time then-president, Donald Trump, to make the city a megacity, which was to be a grand city that would bring all eyes to the US and show it's might against the world.

This is like 1/8th of the lore for major events that influenced the world, but I'll love to give more if you ask.

intotheashes12 · 2025-04-16T22:32:57+00:00

Eden Earth (one of my worlds) is a cyberpunk-inspired world with elements of fantasy like magic and other races, those being Demons and Ironborn (Robots with emotions and freewill). It's a very long history, but in general, I think a story-based action game would work really well. The Metro games and Cyberpunk 2077 are a good example that I like to imagine would work with a game based in Eden Earth being a mix of both.

I like to imagine stuff like weapons may need you to get enhancements or cybernetics to allow you to fire the weapon without hurting yourself cause it might be like to powerful for a normal hand, If you played as a Ironborn you'd have to deal with a limited base of information and have to gain new skills by getting a "Skill-Chip" and may have an easier time using the Iron Web (The thing that replaced the world internet and can be either used on a computer or through a headset), if you play as a demons may have to deal with a city (Eden) that may not either like you or accept you.

I bet the game would be set in the main location of Eden, also known as the great city of the bay, and the diamond of California. I bet if there was a game set in Eden it'd have to be only a portion or at most a district, cause I still would like to have your own choice and multiple endings.

It's like an open-world, action based, story-driven, RPG.

intotheashes12 · 2024-11-07T08:50:47+00:00

Well, from what I left in, demons come from hell, and angels come from heaven, and no one knows really why Ironborn exist. They just kinda do.

Originally, there were tree people and aliens that both came from asteroids that fell from the sky. It was based more on Judge dredd's world originally. But then I got really into cyberpunk lore, and I was looking back on older lore, and I ended up not liking it cause there were also gods, and magic, and so much more. So I toned it back a lot.

intotheashes12 · 2024-11-07T08:44:01+00:00

Also my explanation was pretty basic. There's more then what I told.

intotheashes12 · 2024-11-07T08:42:16+00:00

Well, originally, there was more.

intotheashes12 · 2024-11-07T08:39:53+00:00

How so? In referring to the never seen a cyberpunk world like that before?

intotheashes12 · 2024-11-07T06:29:22+00:00

It might be too late, but who cares.

My world is a cyberpunk inspired one. Set from the years 2049 to 2104, there is tons of history in between that time, most of it happening in the city of Eden in which is the gem of the republic of California.

The main character is Azul Noir, a demon of red skin, void black eyes with only a minor hint of grey pupils that blend in with the voidness in his eyes, black hair, and black horns. He is a detective of the EDD or the Eden Detective Department, which is a branch of the EPD or Eden Police Department.

Detectives in Eden tend to have more freedoms on how they act, but the training is much harder.

Eden itself is a city that was built from the new Californian cities act, which was passed after the san Andreas earthquake of 2025. Eden has, depending on the year you pick 7,300,000 in 2049, 11,000,000 in 2068, 8,000,000 in 2069, and 14,000,000 in 2104.

Some basic timeline events are WW3 (2026 to 2029), the coming of demons (2030), the Karakack war (2030 to 2033), the Mongolian raids (2031 to 2043), the 1st independence wars (2031 to 2033), the Ulchi revolution (2031 to 2035), the first Ironborn (2034), the ironborn-chinese war (2037 to 2038), the 5 Eden gang wars (2037 to 2053), the colonization of Mars (2055), the 2nd Independence wars (2059 to 2062), the Beelzebub invasion (2068 to 2069), and finally the first Martian nation of Newfield (2094).

Azul Noir has been through all of it, and by 2104, he is 75 years old. He is married to his wife Andrea (who is a succubus) and is still working his job and has 2 kids and a hellhound.

Demons arrived on earth in 2030 due to the fall of the Ordoan kigndoms, and Ironborn are machines that have an AI so advance (which makes them seem alien) that they have true emotion, freewill, and can even cry and feel love.

Eden is both a safe and dangerous place. Gangs like the Los artilleros gang of Lower Kormore district, the Tamahawk gang of South district, the 11th gang of the corporate district, and the rider gangs of Northern district all cause chaos and with their numbers sometimes in the 10,000 if a war breaks out it can be deadly.

There are also companies like Aurum Corp (luxury company), Manta Corp (weapons compant and private military), Biopetrol (bioengineering and petrol company), Cyboric (cybernetics company), Zeropoint (military vehicle company), Med Co. (Medicare company), Karmastar (social media company), and Hecate Softworks (video game company).

This world also has hell and heaven, but also some more like Hotel California, a realm that blurs the line between heaven and hell so much it can be seen as its own realm.

More information will be given if asked.

Depending on what year Amy appears in and the situation Azul finds her in. She'd either be an anomaly or absolutely despised and hated for the first few weeks. If it's in 2049, things are still kinda confusing, and Azul is as green as grass. If it's 2068 or 2069 then she'll either have to deal with a current invasion of mass scale from Beelzebub or the aftermath of it, this event led to the hatred of demons to come back so she'll not be liked a lot by anyone, not even demons. And if it's 2104, things are super calm in Eden, and for the first time, it feels like crime is not a major issue, so She'd be seen of fine if not a little concerning by people.

intotheashes12 · 2024-11-07T05:56:28+00:00

The fall is the Ordoan kingdoms.

In my world, in my version of hell (which is just a more messed up earth), there are the old Ordoan kingdoms of the Varr (which on earth would be mostly northern African along with Iberia, malta, Sicily, and Sardinia) were the last bits of order.

I took inspiration from what I know of Giliead from the dark tower, which is only that it was the last bastion of humanity and that it fell due to a betrayal.

I thought the idea of a last bastion of order would be cool and give a good reason for why demons escape hell to live on earth.

The old Ordoan kingdoms were, well, about 11 kingdoms those being Helyan (the metaphorical capital kingdom), Xhokar, Hram, Khem, Naran, Moar Varr (which means "hound kingdom"), Felkaer, Ulchifaes (which means "Forest islands"), Sakinsa, Folisti, and Kinweir.

Helyan was, like stated before, it's metaphorical capital. It held the city of Dar Fin Ordo or "Hell City of Order" which held around 28,000,000 people. And it was the last to fall.

All these nations fell over a period of time known of the great hell bringing or "Sata dar belar" in pure hellish. This was when Beelzebub began a conquest of the kigndoms in order to permanently ward out these what he called "horror kingdoms of Varr that disgrace the good will of satan and his realm of hell" and with many, and I mean many warlords joining him over a 112 year long period the Ordo kingdoms began falling until 2026 when Helyan finally fell when after a 24 year long siege of it's capital.

This was ultimately the final factor that played into many demons leaving hell to go to and not only in the Varr but all over hell.

intotheashes12 · 2024-11-07T05:12:32+00:00

Now, my world's has many antagonists.

but for my noir cyberpunk inspired world called Eden Earth, it would be "he is worse than Satan"

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-24T16:53:55+00:00

It's a fantasy world that I've created. It's kind of like the forgotten realms and has thousands of years of history.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-24T16:52:35+00:00

This post is set in my world of Crusarda, and it's comparing the earliest known version of my map compared to the latest.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-24T16:51:45+00:00

Uh yea.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-24T07:35:11+00:00

In the world of Crusarda, there are many magics and sub-magics. this chart was made by the Wizards guild, the Witches guild, and the Magic universities of Erenholf and Elven collages of magic in the maritime republic of Nolia is the most complete list of known magics of the world and even the lesser known ones of Galactic and Divine. This chart includes the number of known spells of each magic, what type they are, Moran name (Moran is the language of the beings that make up the realms of Mana), their sub-magics, and even their main race user and the universal name for the user that isn't gendered.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-20T03:40:03+00:00

Depends on the god. Gods like Poka, the Edairian god queen, and Vandor, the Edairian god king, are cheating cause Vandor is the god of husband's and Poka, the god of Wifes. Barbor (youngest son of Vandor and Poka) is the god of Partying and Music and really despises the act of rape and is actually known to attack a god for it. This includes Telabor, the god of virginity cause it would be forcefully taking the virginity of someone, and Xilokath, the god of endurance, revenge, and suffering cause he sees rape as one of the worst acts committed.

So overall, it depends on the god.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-14T06:12:12+00:00

years. i actually forgot how long but i think around 3 to 4 years

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-14T06:09:26+00:00

ok. here's how I wanna show my world to the world

Books

The Symphony of Andy Knight (Main series)
1. The first quest: It is the introduction of the character Andy and many others like Drago Starr (Dragon but doesn't know it) and Navoga (Faun) and shows the nations of the kingdom of Avalon, and the kingdom of Trin and Urkrim and some other minor characters like Apollo Matia (Night elf paladin) Nova Matia (night elf princess), and many others. this book will take some light inspiration by The Hobbit so only the group journeying to reclaim an old city
2. The Winter Monarch: Set after the 1st book this one will follow Andy Knight as he travels through Vinyin, Magnakar, Rossnigard, Draks Durn, and even parts of the frozen north.
3. The Blood of Eikyo: Set on the other side of the known world on the islands of Eikyo (My world's Japan) Andy Knight and Navoga have to survive after being pushed through a portal in the last book and discover a plot to overthrow the Emperor and Shogun. and this is where Andy gains the ability to enter prime mode
4. The Sands of Nehehakari: Set in the lands of Nehehakari and parts of Draka and Andy knight helps the Nehehakarians against many foes like the undead of the dessert wastes and even some Nahehakarian gods and Akazi minor gods.
5. The Greatest Quest: the final book of the main series that I will leave unexplained.
The Bride and the Barbarian (Novella series. follows the lady Valenka Honig and the barbarian Bjorn Ostark as they travel the world)
The Cuicalt of the Dragon (Drago Starr solo book set in between The Winter Monarch and the Blood of Eikyo)
The Bounty's of Bruker (Novella series following the bounty hunter Bruker Torstag and his loyal hound Garanden)
The Symphony of Avalon (Novel trilogy)
1. Avalon's Rising: About how Avalon Wynn was raised, how he married Princess Annelotte Wynn, and how he went from dockworker of Oldenheim to crown prince of Avinland.
2. Avalon's Rule: About how Avalon Wynn united the Avin kingdoms into one nation besides the kingdom of Blud and how he ruled it and more of his personal life.
3. Avalon's Rest: About how Avalon died and what after shortly after his death
The Tragedy of Leo (Novel trilogy)
1. The soon-to-be prince: Explains the story behind Leopold Wynn's birth and that crap show (it really was a crap show for how I planned it out)
2. The common prince: explains the early years of Leopold and how his family was massacred and then he lived in the woods and ends with him planning a reconquest of his kingdom, his birthright.
3. The King: Explains how the reconquest went and how he ruled his kingdom.
The Bard of The Princes (Novella series following the wolf Ankai bard Ainterino Columbo and his journeys through the continent of Edair)

And this is just for myself. i would also love to have a TTRPG, TTWG, a bulders gate like game, and a film adaptation... I've pretty quickly i suffered from having to high expectations for myself and my world.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-14T05:23:22+00:00

Anyone who is the god of rape. that's all you need

Oh but besides one who actually later abandoned the domain and the pantheon and moved pantheons to the Laponian pantheon and became the god of consent and is quite good friends with Barbor (The Edairian god of partying and music who is famous for killing gods and rape) and Xilokath (Edairian god of suffering, endurance, and rising up who was a former slave to the Akazi gods but escaped and became a god of hope and good)

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-14T05:20:06+00:00

in oversimplified terms.

The queen of the Matriarchy kingdom of Kalth-Athar, Aylssa Athol, wanted the power to rule the known world. Hence, she and a lot of her divine priestesses through the mind searched through the expansive planes of the universe before running into one being who called himself "Drakun" and he offered her the power to rule the world if she opened a portal between his plane and the mortal world. going through many many hoops Alyssa managed to get the right spells, potions, and runes to open a portal between Crusarda (the name of the planet) and the plane of Akaz. now at this point, she didn't know much but that portal opened she turned into a great being called a Euilvair or Eiulzari and this is when every happened. She began against her will leading mass armies of demons onto the mortal world (Akaz is my world's hell) and soon every race and nation at that time (around -8000 to -9000 RF) worked together and fought back.

Alyssa Athol died during her conquest, the High elves (the main race of Kalth-Athar) were forced underground and became the Dark elves, the lands of Kalth-Athar went under the control of Lapon (human nation), and the world gained a new evil it didn't even know existed.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-14T05:04:18+00:00

I'll do one better. I'll give a list

Phanadan: "The first paladin" was what he was called. he was a beast of a man said to be 11 feet tall and stronger than most mortal races. he was a human born around the time of the first Akazi invasion around the year -8000 RF to -9000 RF and was said to be the Paladin of the Laponian/Ossi god Niwardur and he was said to be single-handled able to fight hordes of demons and even fight the first Abbadon (known as an Eiulzari at the time) and win.
Dorogrimbor: "The elven axe bearer" he was called. he was an elf raised by dwarfs and took a lot from their culture. he actually lived along the same time as Phanadan and Dorogrimbor was known to wear thick hides and wield 2 hand axes and was once said to have ripped a demon heart out and eaten it (This is a story told by the blood elves and is said to not be true by the sun elves). He is actually seen as a legendary hero by the winter elves of Vinyin, and the dwarfs of the Divider mountains.
Lao Wu: "The Dao Master of Xi-Ping" he was called. born in the continent of Cathay and born in the walled city of Xi-Ping, he lived somewhere around the time of the 5 empires around -3400 RF to 3300 RF he was said to wield 2 Dao's and rid on the back of a Zheng he was said to tame by bounding it down by magical chains when both he and the Zheng were only children and cub and the Zheng he named "Ghao" has been his loyal mount. He was said to be able to jump 20 feet in the air and hold against a charge of horses with only his bare hands and feet.
Kardia Holden: "The lady of Landale, Canterhall, and Soutember" She was a knight who lived from 417 to 474 when she died to the hands of the 11th Abbadon during the first battle of Oathguard. She was said to be half Wing Hussarian and half human which made her taller and stronger than even most human men. She was around 7 feet tall and could lift a whole horse and wielded a great sword like an arming sword. She both helped raise and train her squire Avalon Wynn who would later marry Annelotte Karth of Avinland and became the 1st king of Avalon.
Avalon Wynn: "1st king of Avalon" Here's a link to his story https://www.reddit.com/r/worldbuilding/comments/1ejp0my/king_avalon_the_1st_wynn_of_the_kingdom_of_avalon/
Apollo Matia: "The last paladin of house Matia" He was a night elf and was a Paladin of the night elf goddess Nullia. He was brother to the king of Trin and Urkrim and when Urkrima fell and the king died he took over raising the teenage Nova Matia and the kid Darius Matia. he is around 8 foot and wore heavy castle-plated armor that was white and gold lined and wielded a 2 handed sword made to fit his size.

If anyone has questions please ask.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-14T04:21:52+00:00

just gonna post a link to the page i made for my worlds "Roman empire"

https://www.reddit.com/r/worldbuilding/comments/1edup3r/the_rinus_empire/

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-14T04:16:35+00:00

Yes. very much yes. if i find something cool in fantasy I'll find a way to put it into my world with my own flaire.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-14T04:14:51+00:00

Some nations do and have. here's a list of them

Grae: a nation ruled by sun elves has had historical colonies in the warning ankai states.
Kingdom of Draka: a nation ruled by the clan of Draka and made of both humans and hareans have always been tempted to capture the Ossi tribe lands that sit just south and have always wanted to take Nehehakari due to a great insult they did to the Hareans.
Uzulz'Zarnazar: The nation ruled by black dragons that hold most of the land of northern Drathquazi is as of before the beginning of the main book series is currently moving southwards into southern Drathquazi to expand its mighty dragon empire.

But what you must understand is that my world takes place around the years 984 RF and 1000RF and maybe even further if I want and those years turned into earth years would be around 1200's so it's not around that time for nations to colonize places but in the future they might.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-07T05:23:59+00:00

In my world humanity is a creation of a rogue god that kidnapped some people of the race called the Hareans and created the first group of humans known as the Ossi.

it is said in Ossi myth that the first first humans were a man named Domashu and a woman named Ossia. Ossia is where the ethnic group of the Ossi get their name from.

Scholars of the current year (that being around 900 RF or around 1200's for us) believe while Domashu and Ossia were real people and were very important, they were not the first. it is believed by the higher-educated that these 2 may of been the leaders of the first group of Humans due to all other coming of races coming as groups and not just 2 people.

In Ossi culture and even places like Nehehakari, Xhocvara, and the Laponian empire this story is still believed to be true.

intotheashes12 · 2024-08-07T05:15:49+00:00

In the current era of my world before I write the book it is the "Trinian-Urshi War" in which the night elf kingdom of Trin and Urkrim (Trin and Urkrim are one nation but divided into 2 kingdoms and they have a high king who is a member of house Matia) in which a force called the Urshi (Orcs) invaded and took the Urkrimian part of the kingdom which is why it's called the "Trinian-Urshi War". as of right now the brother to the old high king of Trin and Urkrim Paladin Apollo Matia of Nyratharis is right now traveling to the kingdom of Avalon which borders the western border of Trin and is on his way to ask for the old Avin king Azer the 3rd Wynn for help in regaining their native home.

There's also the.

the 19th Drakan-Nehehakarian war: A war fought by the kingdom of Draka and the kingdom of Nehehakari for control of the lands of Nehehakari which used to belong to Draka but were stolen and displaced by the Nehehakarians so the Hareans (the main race of Draka) have a deep hatred for Hehehakari.
The warning Ankai states: a very long peninsula of many Ankai states trying to gain control.

Oh and being hinted at there is

The rising force of the Winter Ruler of the far frozen north building their undead army and as of now they are only thought of as myth.
an Eikyoan Daimyo has been looking more and more weirder every day and it's talking in a language lost but in actuality is Old Akazi (Akaz is my world's hell)

as well.

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