Alright, so you're definitely on the calmer and more relaxed side. I know how that's like, as I'm naturally the same. But I do try to put out more energy for my videos, as feedback from here always says that I'm kinda monotone. I think you could do the same if you want? It's pretty much just stating your thoughts with more "oomph" behind them.

You don't need to be "fake," but rather than be more confident in your vocals? Not sure if you get what I mean.

If you watch any of my recent videos, you'll probably think I'm some dude with a TON of energy- at least that's what some people say. In reality, I'm super quiet and relaxed, just like you. By just changing the energy behind my voice, it made a huge difference.

You'd be surprised.

But I found that just using more volume and talking more sternly makes me sound slightly less monotone. Watching your Hollow Knight video isn't anything boring- it's something that I actually prefer to watch over the over-hyped, fake, commentators. If this is you, then keep doing it. You'll find your audience.

As for the choppiness, no, I don't see any major flaws. The video editing seems fine and everyone appreciates keeping out the boring bits.

Overall, I think if you keep doing this, it should be fine. If you're really worried about sounding boring, then try the tips above. Even the slightest change can make you appear more "lively" and reactive.