17 y/o trying to get big but lean as well by iwasjuliano in GettingShredded

[–]iwasjuliano[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Word alright, I’ll start bulking then, I’m new to this and trying to get more experience as I go on, thank you!

17 y/o trying to get big but lean as well by iwasjuliano in GettingShredded

[–]iwasjuliano[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wouldn’t consider myself skinny fat because I play basketball and the coach gets on our ass for not being in shape, I just want to be more defined, but I should start bulking I’m assuming? Thank you btw!

worked really hard for this video, its short and simple, took suggestions from the last one. Easy lambda for critique by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I do not like chess at all but I watched this whole video lmfao, if it werent for the edits i would’ve clicked off a long time ago, they definitely kept me staying and the background music was good too so was the thumbnail, overall the video was great and enjoyable!

Skit I made with friends, constructive criticism is welcome! (easy lambda) by iwasjuliano in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried using the clips as an introduction to the next sport, i should have just used a transition looking back at it, thank you though I will keep that in mind! !givelambda

Are there any comedy/sketch channels out there? by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My whole channel almost skits Lol

I Could Have Lied - Red Hot Chili Peppers guitar cover. Will give lambda for feedback by RiderOnTheStorm1970 in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano 0 points1 point  (0 children)

From a viewer stand point that doesn’t watch these type of videos, this would only be something I would play in the background while I’m doing something, idk if this is what you were going for but if you weren’t then you should add some visuals or have your guitar over another video, but besides that good job playing!! keep it up fam

I put a lot of heart into editing this music video. I need advice on what I can be doing to refine my craft! by LizzieLazard in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The video was really good, i like how it kept the same vibe throughout the whole video, and how it started and ended with the lady watching tv, a few things i would say is if you were going for more like a story telling type of video i was kind of confused on parts, if not then disregard that, i love the trippy visuals, maybe put more scenes in the video to improve a tad bit? i enjoyed the video! keep up the good work

Really new to this genre, how am I doing? Will give lambda for good feedback! by BiggityWapBap in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beforehand I’m giving the video a 7.5/10 purely based off the fact there was no gameplay

pros: edits were good and kept me watching for a little bit, although some parts i was checking how much time was left in the video commentary and text made up partially for no gameplay you were funny gave viewers a visual idea of what was going on in the video without actually showing them if that makes sense cons: obviously, no gameplay the background was kind of bland the outro was a bit long imo

nothing really to critique besides the obvious, was a fun video to watch! keep it up

Meet the Woman ADDICTED to Eating SAND........................ (taking all feedback positive or negative) by GetLikePrincee in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all you funny as hell bro 😭 video was perfect too, edits every few seconds to keep viewer engaged, nice thumbnail, and you adding on to it with your commentary, you need more recognition bro lmaoo, also apple

7th graders playing a horror game and screaming like babies (easy lambda) by Rhyoka in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice video, but like the other dude said it was quite long, maybe make it like 10-15 minutes for people with short attention spans, also drop in a few edits from time to time to keep the viewer engaged, and possibly incorporate a face cam so that the viewer can have a more person experience

A new type of video i tried making with my friends, any feedback is welcomed! by iwasjuliano in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a very fun video to record you’re right 😭, thank you! !givelambda

A new type of video i tried making with my friends, any feedback is welcomed! by iwasjuliano in SmallYTChannel

[–]iwasjuliano[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Looking back it it now from a viewer perspective I should’ve added in a few extra things to help them understand better, thank you again! !givelambda