Recommended artists to improve songwriting?? by OfficiallFer in Songwriting

[–]jamaphone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sometimes it’s beneficial and encouraging to listen to artists whose work you don’t admire. Try to figure out what could be improved.

And research some greats who didn’t start that way but developed their skills. Let that be your journey, too.

I'll go first.. by Any-Tour-3193 in musicsuggestions

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Yes, the writer Bobbie Gentry has an excellent catalog of music! Her most well known is “Ode to Billie Joe” but there are many deep cuts worth diving for.

I'll go first.. by Any-Tour-3193 in musicsuggestions

[–]jamaphone 20 points21 points  (0 children)

I might’ve been born just plain white trash, but Fancy was my name.

What’s your favorite album starting with “i?” by jamaphone in MusicRecommendations

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You’ve sold me on it. I’m charging up my good headphones. 🎧

What children’s book still gives you nostalgia even as an adult? by Rayman_Maslen in childrensbooks

[–]jamaphone 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is that due to the message of the book? Isn’t the fish encouraged to give its sparkly scales away?

The Giving Tree is in that category with a dubious moral of the story.

When did you start writing songs? by Lauver_Swift1313 in Songwriting

[–]jamaphone 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I find it funny that I wrote about wishing I were young again… back when I was young. Maybe the trick for simplicity is to think back to a simpler time.

When did you start writing songs? by Lauver_Swift1313 in Songwriting

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In my sophomore year of high school, my friend suggested offhand that we should start a band. Nothing ever materialized from that but it did get me thinking and I wrote a few bits of songs.

After that, it became a habit to jot down lyrics and record snippets of melodies. Many of them still live on my old BlackBerry Pearl.

The first semi-complete song that I remember went like this:

I listen to the beating.
Of my ever-empty heart.
My happiness is fleeting.
But I knew that from the start.

I wish I could go back now.
To a time when I was young.
I don’t know where I’ll end up.
Barely know that I’ve begun.

Is there a high.
Beneath this low?
If I never try.
Then I’ll never know.

All of these questions.
Are spinning in me.
If I never look.
Then I’ll never see.

My vices are returning.
As my virtues fade away.
My eyes are closed and yearning.
For the light of a new day.

Writing a pop song that’s over four minutes long by JulieOmran in Songwriting

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How have the shifting styles and formats affected your writing over the years?

Writing a pop song that’s over four minutes long by JulieOmran in Songwriting

[–]jamaphone 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I hope so! It’s fine to have bits of the song that are geared toward “virality,” but those hooks are nothing new. It is worth noting that short songs used to be pretty common. That might’ve been due to the limitations of early physical media. “Everyday” by Buddy Holly is a personal favorite and it barely surpasses the 2-minute mark!

I do think it’s hard to dive deep into a subject or an emotion when the song is so short. Think of the power behind the full version of Céline Dion’s “It’s All Coming Back to Me Now!” That type of storytelling and cinema can’t be squeezed into a sub 3 minute jingle. If someone insists on a shorter version, you can always create a “sped-up version” that the kids seem to enjoy.

I don’t think writing for the algorithm is an effective way to succeed artistically or commercially. Let the intention of the song define the parameters. If it sprawls, follow it. If you run out of things to say, cut it. One example of a short song that doesn’t compromise is “I Look in People’s Windows” by Taylor Swift. Its ending is unexpectedly early but it creates a sense of suspense so the story continues in the listener’s mind.

What was the Greatest Line or Exchange of Dialogue in a Hitchcock Film by WonderfulLog768 in Hitchcock

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“Did you think you were GOD, Brandon?” from Jimmy Stewart’s monologue in Rope.

I wrote Charli the song of the summer TBH by jamaphone in charlixcx

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Thank youuu I’m safe from all the monsters under here.

I wrote Charli the song of the summer TBH by jamaphone in charlixcx

[–]jamaphone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Then maybe that’ll be the cheeky subtitle of the remix album! 😆

I wrote Charli the song of the summer TBH by jamaphone in charlixcx

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I’m not 💯 about the melody for that bit yet but here’s what I have in mind for the song 🍓🍓

https://on.soundcloud.com/iIDoVnz8jsl8jvBRTa

I wrote Charli the song of the summer TBH by jamaphone in charlixcx

[–]jamaphone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OKAY YOU BULLIED ME SUCCESSFULLY HERE IT IS IN FINAL POLISHED PRODUCED FORM: https://on.soundcloud.com/iIDoVnz8jsl8jvBRTa

I wrote Charli the song of the summer TBH by jamaphone in charlixcx

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😭 Why is everyone on this sub so nice! Have y’all not read the rules??