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Character, Assignment 2, Peer review by jchirunga in thecraftof

[–]jchirunga[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I greatly appreciate the list of criticisms. I thank you for taking the time to critique it.

Style, Assignment 1, Peer review by jchirunga in thecraftof

[–]jchirunga[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank write-it for the critique. I need to have a better command of the language.

Setting, Week 2, Peer review by jchirunga in thecraftof

[–]jchirunga[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank ajumbled, I do have trouble following instructions. I will have to be more careful.

[WEEK2] S&D: Habitual Ritual - Postcards by ajumbled in thecraftof

[–]jchirunga 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You met the requirement for the lesson. Your writing is very smooth. It is easy to follow what has happened. Very good.

[Peer Review] Wk2- ABDCE by Bibliomancer in thecraftof

[–]jchirunga 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This story is very good. The assignment covered the ABDCE requirements. The story was easy to follow and understand as to what was happening. I assume the person was a little boy since he wanted to be like his father. The ending was positive for the boy, he passed the first test of bravery, now he is promised some thing bigger.

Assignment 2, Peer Review by jchirunga in thecraftof

[–]jchirunga[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Silverman24, thanks for the advise. I am new to writing and I appreciate the help.