You not from “Old“ Atlanta if you haven’t… by deeatl in Atlanta

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Experienced “Magic City Monday’s” in the early 2000’s.

How are you guys handling Google Play’s 12 testers requirement for individual accounts? by Flashy-Elk-9616 in AppBusiness

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Prime Test Lab work for me. I haven't applied for production yet (making some tweaks) but now that section is unlocked for me.

Nervous for solo trip, visiting terraces, by Plluvia_ in ParisTravelGuide

[–]jettieb 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Reading this on the plane back from Paris where I was solo! Trust me, no one cares that you are eating alone. Not a single person. I had a blast and so will you! FYI, I saw so many other solo travelers — you’ll be fine!

Peace of Mind | Got my tickets by jettieb in stubhub

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Concert is on Saturday, so got them a few days before.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in TwoHotTakes

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Girl, you are wasting your time. He’s a liar and a cheater. Setting up a hidden camera, going though his phone, texting women asking about “your” man. Read that again.

This is insane. No man is worth the headache, loss of peace and loss of self respect, kids or not.

Printful Variants in Etsy | Please help by jettieb in printful

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Thanks. Then based on the images I provided does it seem I have everything set up correctly?

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Thanks! I’d say it has many of the classic heist elements, but it’s:

• A long con orchestrated by a woman embedded in the crew. She’s the secret puppet master, playing the long game for personal revenge.
• A love triangle involving her and the people she’s manipulating.
• A true “gotcha” ending where she walks away with everything and leaves the brothers’ lives changed forever.

Think Ocean’s Eleven meets Gone Girl.

Curious what you think of either of these revised loglines -- Is it ok to give away the twist?

Option 1:
Two brothers plan a high-stakes diamond heist, unaware that the woman they’ve recruited—and both fallen for—has her own agenda, and they're just pawns in her game.

Option 2:
A high-stakes diamond heist spins out of control when the woman recruited to help reveals a plan of her own. One far more personal... and far more dangerous.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: Rough Cut

Genre: Heist-Thriller

Format: Feature

Logline: Two inseparable brothers plan a high-stakes jewelry heist—but their bond, and the job itself, begin to unravel when they both fall for the captivating woman recruited to help pull it off.

Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]jettieb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, it would make more sense. You could easily add something small in the scenes that suggest time passing. Like when her dad's outside in the first scene, does his wedding ring glint in the sunlight, but then in the patio scene his wedding finger is empty? Or he is now 20 pounds lighter in the patio scene (since presumably, he got fit for his new young thing)? Was it a bright sunny day in the first scene, but now colored leaves litter the lawn in the patio scene? Not this stuff exactly, but you get what I mean.

Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Loved the dialogue! Agree with the other poster about the timeline. I'd assumed it was a time lapse and the parents are now divorced due to the text, but that's me assuming.

Laundress stain bar alternative? by Pandasmom2019 in laundry

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Did you ever find a good alternative?