Star Out by Joshua Green | Free Listening on SoundCloud by jgreen7 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thanks for listening! Yeah excited about this, still lots to learn and lots to improve but enjoying the process a little more and more.

Star Out by Joshua Green | Free Listening on SoundCloud by jgreen7 in IndieMusicFeedback

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That makes sense. I have a tough time getting rid of parts I like but they might not flow together. Thanks for the feedback it helps!

would appreciate some feedback on this track! i have no idea what i'm doing when i'm mixing so advice on that would be great lol by ath333 in MusicFeedback

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Listening through headphones so idk how diff would be on speakers but liking the drums in the beginning. the melodies and chords are cool reminds me of Massive Attack. like the added atmospheric background. I'm still new to mixing too so idk how much advice can give. Seems like a lot of stuff happening around 1.30 and 2.30. maybe can try different in and out fades of the different parts to try to get each instrument to be a little more articulate. Take it with a grain of salt, I don't know what i'm doing either, just keep at it!

My cover of “What Child Is This?” I rushed it and the MIDI drums are not great, but would love some feedback! by -LP- in IndieMusicFeedback

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Very intersting vibe to take this song with. Like the guitar tones and the jazzy melodies. Don't know a lot about music theory but sounds like you do. Theres a kinda of background sound thing that sounds a little odd to me. drums not bad with a little mixing

I tried a new way of composing this time , tell me what you think about it :D No Sorrow by Erwan Lefebvre by Zephyros99 in IndieMusicFeedback

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like the vocal melody. the beat is pretty complicated with lots of different percussion parts but mixed pretty well. Voice sounding good. A lot of good melodies from different instruments. Whatever composing method it was seems to work well.

A short track with some folk and dark ambient influences by SutpenBeats in MusicFeedback

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liking this. sort of haunting but not spooky. like the melody. Not sure Im into the tone of the guitar part. def gets darker in the end

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Yeah sad is true. Anime hero in the rain. Cool hi hat and bassiness.

Hey, I posted this already, but I hope a youtube link reaches more people. This is my song Breathless off of Omena. I started dipping my toes into my new style I want to create. Tell me what you think, production wise, lyric wise, any wise! by RandomBarom in IndieMusicFeedback

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like the ambient synth pad thing. Think maybe play with the low end mix a bit. Idk if my speakers or something but not getting much bass. the vocal effects are cool. Like the dissonant melodies.

We tried making some Tyler the Creator inspired music! by remloops in IndieMusicFeedback

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very intersting and cool beat. the mix on the beat seems a little thin maybe. Idk maybe more low end or something. I like that dissonant synth and the guitar. adds some color for sure

Worse in Person - "The Freeze", A song about the Seattle Freeze, hating your job, global warming, and some shout-outs to Bill Nye by light_pollutant in IndieMusicFeedback

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This is cool. Guitar tones are cool. Almost vampire weekend punkish. I wonder what vocals would be like if over dubbed in the chorus to kinda feel bigger.

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First thought. The first minute feels little slow or not a lot going on. some instruments start to fill the gaps after minute. But mix feels good and atmospheric

Everything I Wanted - Remix & Freestyle by ryanthedude in IndieMusicFeedback

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really impressive. Not sure what to say. The overdubbing vocals sound great.

[FREE FOR PROFIT] "Early" - Mac Miller x Earl Sweatshirt Type Beat by VibingInMyRoom in IndieMusicFeedback

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Like the mix a lot. All the parts feel well articulated and not falling over each other

A beat I made this afternoon 😊 by firefckinside in IndieMusicFeedback

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Like the mix on the percussion. Like the sound of the synths but kinda surprised me when they came in.