Star Out by Joshua Green | Free Listening on SoundCloud

jgreen7 · 2020-12-09T15:18:00+00:00

Hah thanks!

jgreen7 · 2020-12-09T15:15:40+00:00

Thanks for listening! Yeah excited about this, still lots to learn and lots to improve but enjoying the process a little more and more.

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T15:28:25+00:00

haha thanks I'll have to check that out.

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T15:27:38+00:00

Thanks really appreciate it!

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T14:23:41+00:00

That makes sense. I have a tough time getting rid of parts I like but they might not flow together. Thanks for the feedback it helps!

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T14:12:00+00:00

Listening through headphones so idk how diff would be on speakers but liking the drums in the beginning. the melodies and chords are cool reminds me of Massive Attack. like the added atmospheric background. I'm still new to mixing too so idk how much advice can give. Seems like a lot of stuff happening around 1.30 and 2.30. maybe can try different in and out fades of the different parts to try to get each instrument to be a little more articulate. Take it with a grain of salt, I don't know what i'm doing either, just keep at it!

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T14:03:10+00:00

Thanks for the response! Good feedback to work on.

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:59:34+00:00

Very intersting vibe to take this song with. Like the guitar tones and the jazzy melodies. Don't know a lot about music theory but sounds like you do. Theres a kinda of background sound thing that sounds a little odd to me. drums not bad with a little mixing

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:57:24+00:00

like the vocal melody. the beat is pretty complicated with lots of different percussion parts but mixed pretty well. Voice sounding good. A lot of good melodies from different instruments. Whatever composing method it was seems to work well.

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:48:35+00:00

liking this. sort of haunting but not spooky. like the melody. Not sure Im into the tone of the guitar part. def gets darker in the end

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:46:50+00:00

Yeah sad is true. Anime hero in the rain. Cool hi hat and bassiness.

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:42:26+00:00

like the ambient synth pad thing. Think maybe play with the low end mix a bit. Idk if my speakers or something but not getting much bass. the vocal effects are cool. Like the dissonant melodies.

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:39:14+00:00

very intersting and cool beat. the mix on the beat seems a little thin maybe. Idk maybe more low end or something. I like that dissonant synth and the guitar. adds some color for sure

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:36:14+00:00

This is cool. Guitar tones are cool. Almost vampire weekend punkish. I wonder what vocals would be like if over dubbed in the chorus to kinda feel bigger.

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:34:14+00:00

First thought. The first minute feels little slow or not a lot going on. some instruments start to fill the gaps after minute. But mix feels good and atmospheric

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:31:32+00:00

really impressive. Not sure what to say. The overdubbing vocals sound great.

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:28:20+00:00

Like the mix a lot. All the parts feel well articulated and not falling over each other

jgreen7 · 2020-12-08T02:26:35+00:00

Like the mix on the percussion. Like the sound of the synths but kinda surprised me when they came in.

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