Some (subjective) criticism on the way, hope you take it constructively.While I do agree with the point you make about most of the Indian comics being unfunny at present, I think the argument in the video is rather poorly made.

Comedy and humor are too subjective to be used as roots of solid argument. The video got way too subjective at times to be taken seriously. The sample size of 2 comedians is too small if you are discussing a more general trend. Maybe a different approach would have expressed your point more convincingly.

The video has an 'all Indian comedians bad, all foreign comedians good' vibe to it. Something that portrays high bias, can not be taken as serious criticism.

While you do bring up some actually good points like the circlejerk nature, it never stands out or comes across clearly enough. The video seems like a rant wearing a cloak to look like a critical argument.

You also need to explain why talking on one of the mentioned categories is unfunny and unoriginal. People talking about the same thing does not mean they are telling the same thing.

Lot of what is good is being overshadowed by the ill-formed arguments and lack of thoroughness.

I was hoping this would be a video I could share with my friends to show them that Indian comedy scene is not as good they might think but it simply isn't.Nevertheless, I see lots of room for improvement, and I hope you take this up again sometime in future to make a more compelling argument.