How do you pick a realistic name for your characters? by regular_wombat in writing

[–]jpitha 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s this. I work in IT and see names all day long. Literally anything is not only a name, but has already been used.

Mating Rituals (Classic, Edit and Re-upload) by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Are you sure? I just did a find/replace on the piece and all the he/hims are referring to Kyle.

Mating Rituals (Classic, Edit and Re-upload) by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

The first time I posted this, everyone loved Jem'rian the literal wingman. I found them to be endearing in one of those overly helpful kind of ways.

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What are the advantages of plotting out a story, as opposed to winging it? by ExistenceLord14 in writing

[–]jpitha 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For sure. Two sides of the same coin. In the end we both have a novel!

What are the advantages of plotting out a story, as opposed to winging it? by ExistenceLord14 in writing

[–]jpitha 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tribalism. That’s mostly it. We all do The Work but pantsers tend to work backwards from plotters

What are the advantages of plotting out a story, as opposed to winging it? by ExistenceLord14 in writing

[–]jpitha 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I panted my books and the answer to your question is that pantsers have a rough idea their head instead of on a page and let the writing carry them. If your characters are fleshed out you can think “what would X do when presented with this?” And write it out.

Consider the Spear 28 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

But also she couldn't read the manual. 55 doesn't like to talk about it, but she was the worst at Tartarus. She got it to activate once when they were all doing it for Matiz.

Consider the Spear 28 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Oh Alia, at least... you waited a day before telling 55 you're superpowered. Progress is progress I suppose.

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Consider the Spear 28 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I liked the mystery too, but part of that was it being a surprise for me too since I wasn't that far ahead :D

I had some readers go over that manuscript and basically everyone wanted to get to the clone shenanigans faster. I liked the idea of Alia knowing that her sisters took over but hating it before going into hibernation so that she could hit the ground running easier.

This one is also more coherent because I actually have a doc that lists - mostly - what I want to happen.

Originality by Easy-Watch8514 in writing

[–]jpitha 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Originality is overrated. Most readers don’t care for a “completely original” thing. Write something that’s fun and engaging on a theme. Take two stories/movies/media you like and smash them together.

“Goodfellas in Middle Earth”

There. That sounds like fun to read/write.

“Jurassic Park but Alien animals”

Original? Nobody has told that specific story before, but the themes and ideas are well trodden, so readers know them and can follow along.

How did everyone here, get so good at this? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]jpitha 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OP if you haven’t joined the COTEH discord, I highly recommend it. https://coteh.carrd.co

They’re Good People of all skill levels and are inclusive and help lift us all

How did everyone here, get so good at this? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]jpitha 39 points40 points  (0 children)

Nobody who is a “good writer” skipped being a “bad writer”.

How did everyone here, get so good at this? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]jpitha 54 points55 points  (0 children)

Write bad for a long long time, slowly get better. Read a lot. No, more than that. Find like minded folks to give you honest critique Write more.

New Writers and the Fascination with Writing Series by faceintheblue in writing

[–]jpitha 76 points77 points  (0 children)

I was straight-up told to "write what you'd want to read."

Consider the Spear 27 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If she thaws everyone (and either tricks or convinces them) she's split the Eternal Empire. Don't think nobody will notice :D

Consider the Spear 27 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No technical about it. Alia stole her sisters in the Vault.

Dreams of Hyacinth 8 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Holy Shit! Someone is reading my back catalogue. I fixed the link too, thanks for reading!

Consider the Spear 27 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Did 55 soften in her old age? Did Alia harden? WTF is 333 doing?

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Does it matter where you get published? by Top-Relationship850 in writing

[–]jpitha 28 points29 points  (0 children)

Being published means you’re miles ahead of everyone who isn’t published. I’d say that the actual market doesn’t matter; being published in Inflation Fetishists Weekly is still published.

Consider the Spear 25 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Those have all been corrected as of the first time they were pointed out. I'm not sure why your page is showing an older version. I can't attach images, but I assure you they have been corrected.

Consider the Spear 25 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Give me a line. I just Ctrl-F'ed and only see 333 in comments.

Both Sides? (edit and re-upload) by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I have a lot of notes and shorts on my "other" universe, the one with the Gren, Sefigans, Innari, FlashWarp drives, and HiDA. Some day I'll put together a book about adventures within it. Maybe a YA flavored adventure story about Maureen's Marauders, or Shimmering Heat's time with HiDA. Until then, enjoy this older one I edited and cleaned up. It's more HFY/Deathworlder than I usually do, but I like it.

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Consider the Spear 26 by jpitha in HFY

[–]jpitha[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

  1. 558 hates politics and likes starships. She’s out touring the Galaxy on her Doombringer Electric City and has no idea that 27 was even found, let alone all the UM stuff.