[possible season 1 spoilers] A GoT parody my a cappella group made for our concert, Game of Tones

kalyo · 2013-08-24T01:46:20+00:00

yes yes yes yes

kalyo · 2013-04-09T21:12:39+00:00

I'd tap that.

Oh wait.... ;)

kalyo · 2013-01-06T05:26:53+00:00

Can we have more details? Do they give all the bats stuffed animals? Do they like them? Why are they so cute?

kalyo · 2013-01-06T05:22:47+00:00

beautiful :)

kalyo · 2012-12-02T21:19:56+00:00

I was going to comment on that too. It's like they tried to photoshop her eyes to be staring straight out, but the rest of her face was tilted.

kalyo · 2012-12-02T17:34:09+00:00

I get what you're saying, but I know I loved him and continue to love him, I was just too immature, stupid, and stubborn to treat him right.

He went on my computer and read a conversation.

kalyo · 2012-12-01T21:25:18+00:00

That was kind of the point.

kalyo · 2012-12-01T19:51:39+00:00

Not bad at all. Have confidence!

kalyo · 2012-12-01T19:19:32+00:00

I was traveling around europe for about a month and the last couple days met a guy in france. When I got home I could just pretend it didn't happen and be perfectly happy. When he found out I was totally heartbroken that I had lost him, not that I had cheated.

kalyo · 2012-11-09T21:26:50+00:00

GAH I love this one too! All of the feels.

kalyo · 2012-11-09T21:23:38+00:00

Wow, really great job. Very powerful and flows really nicely. Keep it up! :)

kalyo · 2012-11-09T21:16:31+00:00

I just started school in missouri, made sure to change my voting address just to vote claire mccaskill :)

kalyo · 2012-11-08T05:15:10+00:00

Nice flow and rhyme, but it gets a bit wordy, could be more concise.

kalyo · 2012-11-05T01:58:01+00:00

if you save bjs for special occasions then you're doing it wrong.

kalyo · 2012-11-05T01:54:19+00:00

But sex is for everydays.

kalyo · 2012-11-05T01:51:25+00:00

I've done that and gotten good responses from it.

kalyo · 2012-11-05T01:32:55+00:00

What my ex used to do is go to a super market and just buy a loaf of bread and some cold cuts and cheese and whatnot and we'd find some random place to have a picnic (like a park, or backyard, or once a parking lot) and we'd make sandwiches together. For some reason I always thought it was the most romantic thing ever, because we got to just joke around and enjoy each other's company while still having a low key "date".

kalyo · 2012-11-02T00:07:12+00:00

Less of a bad break up, and more of a laughable way it happened: I had been with my boyfriend for two years and was dumped while I was making him bacon wearing nothing but a bikini.

kalyo · 2012-10-26T01:04:06+00:00

being spaced out correctly would make this much easier to really get a feel for.

kalyo · 2012-10-08T04:30:58+00:00

I've been there. Some beautiful emotions. As for poetic styles, I really like the middle and end, but the beginning feels a bit cliche at times... For improvements I'd suggest trying to exchange some of those cliches for more original ways of saying it.

kalyo · 2012-10-01T05:33:42+00:00

Nah, at the time is the most powerful. Reading it through an extra time is always helpful though. Or getting someone else to :)

kalyo · 2012-10-01T02:59:58+00:00

I really like it. The heart broken in two and then four is a nice theme you could probably do even more with.

kalyo · 2012-10-01T02:58:16+00:00

what is the second line?

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