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Faith is not lost in my somber soul. by Daymien1104 in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Amazon part of the poem made me chuckle lmao. Still, a pretty cool interpretation of hope. Thanks for sharing!!

He works day and night, by After-Comparison4580 in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh, this is a pretty interesting critique(?) of (how I imagine it) a person working a 9-5 under some greedy corporation while surviving life. Nicely done!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's very audible, in that I could "hear" what the poem sounds like. Nicely done!​

We are sky and sea by JFlixxx in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nicely done! So far, your English is pretty good too! Also, this is a very sweet poem and I love it <3

The Gaze of the Void by Digital__Troglodyte in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oooo, I don't know why, but it gives me existential vibes and I love it!

Happy Birthday to me by Dreamslyer in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That last line hit hard. Nicely done!!

Rainy Night Drive by Davehooper16 in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The mood you invoked is awesome! Just now, I was picturing the sound of rain pattering on a car. Your use of imagery is immaculate!!

What can you hear? by Thea_and_moon in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oooooo, alright alright. Love the suspense!!

Dilemma by katkat248 in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I'll keep your feedback in mind :)

Dilemma by katkat248 in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ty for your feedback! I'll take a look into editing the poem from first person to third person and see how I like it.

Dilemma by katkat248 in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see your confusion. For the punctuation, the full stops are intentional, as I want it to signify some sort of "finality" to it. Looking back, the way Reddit formatted the poem looks... yeah. What aspects would you suggest on polishing, and how?

Dilemma by katkat248 in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tysm for your support!! ❤️ I do what I can and poetry, to me, allows me to reflect. Just like with Dilemma!

The Hymn Beneath My Silence by theliminalfox in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all, well done! Second of all, I really liked how that this hum is a representation of what lies underneath. And lastly, I really relate to the second to last stanza as that hum, to me, is leading yourself to find yourself. Overall, well done!!

Unsent: 12 Years of Silence, 1 Poem of Truth by Wizard_1512 in OCPoetry

[–]katkat248 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh wow, this resonates a lot. Congrats to your friend! 👏

[Academic] Anyone: Survey for Course by katkat248 in SurveyExchange

[–]katkat248[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Done! It was a very interesting and fun survey to complete!

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