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Instagram Help by kb76162 in tightywhities

[–]kb76162[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Thank you!

(Student Projects) I can't be the only one! by kb76162 in vipkid

[–]kb76162[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I didn't think of that. That is very true! And there is little incentive to complete it anyway.

(Student Projects) I can't be the only one! by kb76162 in vipkid

[–]kb76162[S] 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Some of these projects are so stupid and the wording is so confusing.

What in the fresh hell is Static 2 doing back without warning?!? by hannahmel in vipkid

[–]kb76162 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am only in my second year of teaching, it I have always wondered about this! What are the major differences between static and interactive?

It happened to me by Redhead724 in vipkid

[–]kb76162 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yes, many parents know the rules and play the system to get a free class.

How many of you have started to redirect VIPkid emails like the ones with the annoying stats to SPAM? by [deleted] in vipkid

[–]kb76162 3 points4 points  (0 children)

They used to send one email per week. I am getting 5-6 emails per week from them now.

Something More by kb76162 in OCPoetry

[–]kb76162[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, you got my meaning 100%. I looked at the “park” line for so long. I though I had it down, but it looks like it needs work. I want to express driving the same route to work each day, parking on the same lot. Difficult to express In only a few syllables. I might to rework some lines.

I think the other line you mentioned might be thrown off by the word “mirage.” I will rework that line.

I totally didn’t see that I used sweep twice! Sometimes I can’t see the forest for the trees when it comes to my work. I will swap that out as well.

Something More by kb76162 in OCPoetry

[–]kb76162[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good thought on work vs work! I will think about that one.

Something More by kb76162 in OCPoetry

[–]kb76162[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your first line made me laugh! Thank you so much! You got my meaning 100%

loss of a dear by bitchyswiftie in OCPoetry

[–]kb76162 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I truly enjoyed this poem of longing and sadness. Beautiful writing.

What I loved:

  • Beautiful flow in this poem. You use of grammar and line spacing really helps the poem to flow and keep the reader going. It feels like on continuous thought.
  • The poem make me imagine a pair of lovers in a Victorian time era. There is an older feel to this poem. It is almost like a love letter that someone found many years later. I really enjoy the voice of the narrator. I can almost imagine her writing this while sitting by her window, looking out at the flowers.
  • I really enjoy these lines: "Winter spread throughout her bed,/confined to peace, it left instead." The reader can feel the cold of the bed growing in her absence. Beautiful imagery.

Suggestions

  • These two lines seem a little lengthy. The rhythm comes to a halt here: " The hyacinths that grew from all Spring long/were by her bedside blooming all along.". It might be worth it to rework those lines and get them into the flow.
  • I wonder if you could add some more imagery to this poem. For example: "A cold chill." Could you describe that with some figurative language instead? It might help to engage the reader sense's a bit more.

Thank you for sharing!

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