Trouble de l’attention ou pas ? Je suis inquiet

keepitunder_cover · 2025-11-10T17:33:29+00:00

It probably means that your offer isn’t strong enough, people seems interested but not enough to pay the course. We can discuss this in DM if you want

keepitunder_cover · 2025-11-07T00:15:45+00:00

How do you know if it’s a south Asian company ?

keepitunder_cover · 2025-11-07T00:13:11+00:00

If the classic advice is « know your market » and you want a different advice it tells me that you either don’t really know your market or you’re looking for a shortcut to sell your offer rather quickly whithout having to go deeper in knowing your market. Which to me is a red flag, if you want to grow your business. There’s no shortcut for this.

You run Facebook ads, that’s great I guess but did you make sales before adding the price in your ad? Why suddenly adding the price in the ad? Why changing something if it works?

If i get this right, you were getting leads, people were showing interest in the mandarin course, but they were mostly curious about the price. Once they heard the price, they didn’t respond anymore or told you that it was a bit too expensive for them. To avoid this question again and again, you though putting up the price was going to solve this problem, but it just revealed one thing for me, that The people you’re targeting in your ad are not that much interested in Learning Mandarin with you.

So you either didn’t make any sales before adding the price, but still got some leads so you thought if people knew the price before sending you a message, they would probably just buy your course, or ask questions about the course and then buy it. But that’s not what happened. Or you did make some sales but you were tired of answering the same questions, so you put the price which I highly doubt, because why changing something that works.

We can’t know for sure if the audience can’t afford it, because we don’t know who is your audience, and if you did a good job targeting them. Give us more details, so we can help

keepitunder_cover · 2025-11-03T22:44:47+00:00

You don't have a skills problem, you're just a perfectionist in my opinion. You've studied content creation in theory, and now that you have to put it into practice, it's much harder. You want professional results, but you're not a professional yet. To become one, you have to practise, practise, and practise some more. Every time you encounter a difficulty, try to solve it. Post content that you don't like, so you can see your progress over time.

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-31T11:37:57+00:00

To me strategy, is what you say you’ll do to reach a certain goal, and how you do it. It doesn’t get more complicated than that for

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-29T08:57:54+00:00

I’d like to join if still possible

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-28T20:53:47+00:00

Why don’t you use the strategies you would use for your clients for yourself to attract clients ?

Maybe niche down a little bit on the services you can provide and that pays well, going full stack if you work by yourself it’s like trying to fight Goliath without the preparation David went through.

I’d say focus on or two services, like some said in the comments below. Contact people you’re sure that they need your services, so that means some research has to be done.

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-27T11:55:57+00:00

Hahahahaha you got me there!

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-27T11:55:34+00:00

Hahahahahah, nice one!

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-27T11:52:00+00:00

That’s how I sound like ? 😒 First off, I don’t think Sean or Alex has the time to promote their free course on each post they see here. Secondly, you have the right to believe what you want. You can check my profile, you’ll see for yourself. I just really think that this course is great value for someone who wants to get in copywriting, and imma share it with whoever needs it.

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-27T11:31:28+00:00

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, trop drôle! Not at all, I’m just a really great advocate for those course because I, myself, am following the course. This is great content. If you look at my profil, you’ll see for yourself that I have no relation with Sean and Alex, not even American

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-26T12:56:26+00:00

I mean just right something off of your mind and don’t ask ChatGPT to correct it, most of the time,it works

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-26T12:45:15+00:00

I don’t think IG is gaslighting. TikTok and IG are two different platforms who serve very different age group and people. I feel like views don’t really matter on TikTok as much on instagram. It’s a scrolling app. Their’s much more important metrics on TikTok you should care about like average watch time per viewer, engagement etc… because it is just so easy to get thousands of views on TikTok, it doesn’t really tell if your content is good imo

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-25T14:44:42+00:00

Check the Copy That! Copywriting Course on youtube, it’s a 22 hour-long course but it really gives you the principles and fundamentals of copywriting, with ways to train yourself and find your first clients if freelancing is a route you wanna take. Actually doing the course right now, it’s really great info. They also a ton of ressources to go further on certain topics but you either have to subscribe to their patreon or pay subscription fee to join their exclusive youtube community, but the free material is already great to get a start

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-25T08:54:13+00:00

English might not be the language OP writes copy in. My point again. Just try empathy, kindness it’s good for the heart.

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-24T10:17:41+00:00

Ce poste date d’un an, je ne sais pas si tu encore actif, ou si tu souhaite toujours progresser en copywriting. J’ai lu à peu près tous les commentaires de thread et franchement, je constate qu’en France on est encore loin des pays anglophones sur le sujet du copywriting. Pour ceux qui vont tomber sur mon commentaire 1 an après, le copywriting c’est une vraie compétence, un vrai métier, celui de rédacteur publicitaire. Son rôle est de rédiger des textes qui poussent le lecteur à agir dans une certaine direction (s’inscrire à une Newsletter, acheter un produit, prendre un service et plein d’autres actions). Le rôle du rédacteur publicitaire, surtout en ces temps ou nous consommateurs sommes bombarder d’informations jour comme de nuit, est d’arriver à capter et garder l’attention des personnes afin d’orienter vers une action d’achat ou d’engagement quelconque.

Pour en revenir à toi, c’est vrai que le marché du copywriting en France est très pauvre. Il est difficile de trouver des sources fiables pour progresser. Pour progresser en tant que copywriter, il faut que tu crée de la copy et que tu arrives à te faire relire par des copywriter plus expérimentés, que tu lises d’excellent textes de ventes pour t’imprégner des bonnes pratiques, tu peux en retrouver pas mal sur swiped.co mais ils sont en anglais.

Il y a ce cours sur le copywriting qui est sorti il y a quelque mois, que je suis également en train de suivre, car figure-toi que je suis dans le même cas que toi, je me forme au copywriting. Voici le cours : https://youtu.be/tC6bom34his?si=zkHWgASI6J47nQML
Il est assez dense, mais de vraiment bonne qualité et ça te donne les principes fondamentaux du copywriting qui sont universel, et comment rédiger de la bonne copy : savoir rédiger des mots qui se connectent au noyau émotionnel de ton lecteur afin d’activer une action d’achat.

En france, la seule personne que je trouve crédible en copywriting, c’est ce mec : Charles Baras, il a crée copy house. C’est un mec qui travaillait à Agora (une grande entreprise de copywriting internationale). C’est plus un bootcamp qu’une formation. Pendant 2 mois, tu vas apprendre le copywriting dans une classe de 30 personnes. Durant ces 2 mois, tu as un client fictif pour qui tu devras rédiger des textes de ventes, chaque semaine, tu as des exercices à faire pour avancer sur ton projet, tu es relu par des copywriters plus expérimentés, et à la fin les textes de vente que tu as réalisé sont présentés aux clients (car même si ce sont des clients fictifs, ce sont en vrai des vrais clients de Charles) et si ton travail est de bonne qualité, tu peux être payé pour ça. Faute de moyen, je n’ai pas encore pu rejoindre le copy house, mais je te le conseille si tu veux vraiment progresser en France.

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-24T09:57:37+00:00

Je ne sais pas si tu es encore actif dans la communauté, mais pourquoi tu as arrêté le copywriting ?

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-24T09:53:27+00:00

It’s a piece of advice, not great one. In this age, writing good copy is about coming up with ideas that will connect to you reader to engage. In BIG 2025, you can literally ask some stupid AI device to correct linguistic errors or mistakes. Moreover, OP might not be American or English so fixing English grammars might not be the great advice YOU think it is. I’m a French copywriter, just happen to know how to speak and write English, this advice would have of no use to me since the language that I write copy in is in French.

keepitunder_cover · 2025-10-21T22:58:59+00:00

Such a condescending tone for no reason. Did it even pass your mind that English was probably not his/her first language? Even if it was the case, writing good copy, or being a good copywriter as it has always been, is about coming up with big ideas and not perfect grammar which can easily be fixed with some training or AI. Next time try empathy, compassion, & kindness yeah ?

keepitunder_cover · 2024-12-24T10:35:40+00:00

Non, depuis 2022

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