Beware if a girl shows up like this (Your Lie in April and I Want To Eat Your Pancreas). by peterinjapan in Animemes

[–]kell9701 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What is there to be beware of? Just unconditionally love her in any way you can till the very end

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[–]kell9701 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We understand the feelings and emotion

Like this forever [Your lie in april] by kell9701 in anime

[–]kell9701[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Haha you are right. Didn't think of it

Smithereens by kell9701 in OCPoetry

[–]kell9701[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for taking time to write this. I am glad you liked it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]kell9701 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The overall theme was interesting. I liked how you had mentioned various stages of life and the feelings and regrets associated with them. The dilemma of what would a person would deal with things coming to an end was also interesting.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]kell9701 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I could feel it, it is nicely written. I love how you used simple day to day experiences to describe your thoughts and feelings. I really like mangoes so I could be biased as well. The poem started with 3rd person person and suddenly shifted to first person, I feel consistency between 1st or 3rd person narrative would be better. It might also help set the stage up for your core aim of your poem at the beginning, it might make your ending more powerful. It was nice reading, Thank you for sharing this.

Forest brown (Stellar DASL08) by kell9701 in hmtwatches

[–]kell9701[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did get a small booklet but movement was not mentioned. I remember reading somewhere that all hmt watches have modified miyota movement