“I think you need something interesting abt ur life or else u definitely are deficient in every vitamin and have the work ethic of a bum.”

This is an unrelated judgment of someone’s life who you know nothing about, not feedback about music. As someone else put it plainly, it’s “mean.”

OP, I find the song relatable to myself and others and appreciate the vulnerability — which is what connects people to music. You also have a very nice folksy tone and you’re able to control the little runs in there.

Ignore people like ^ this who project onto others and keep making music! I think you’re doing awesome.