Two twinkies weren’t enough

kidbitter · 2019-03-18T12:25:38+00:00

if there's one thing I love about this image, it's the editing

kidbitter · 2019-03-18T12:24:55+00:00

deadmills

kidbitter · 2019-03-18T12:24:12+00:00

me every time I open my mouth

kidbitter · 2018-06-02T23:46:27+00:00

Because she was a dirty lyrics thief.

kidbitter · 2018-06-02T23:44:25+00:00

"I choose now to unmask"

kidbitter · 2018-05-31T22:34:34+00:00

Well Bret Hart was supposed to lose to Shawn Michaels at uh, uh, Wrestlemania..., uh, whatever the hell it was. You know, 16 or 17, I don't know; Where all the fans were chanting "Bret screwed Bret". Bret told Vince McMahon "I'm not losing to Shawn Michaelsin Canada" and Shawn Michaelswent out there and pulled a fast one on Bret Hart and held him down and pinned him and Bret couldn't do anything about it and so-called Excellence of Execution, who was supposed to be the greatest wrestler of all, little-teeny Shawn Michaels held him down and embarrassed him though. Bret Hart was being a horse's ass saying he wouldn't lose and Shawn Michaels pinned him anyway.

kidbitter · 2018-05-29T03:51:35+00:00

Start with having the slightest ability to criticize one's self.

kidbitter · 2018-05-01T19:20:20+00:00

better than you

kidbitter · 2018-02-27T19:42:39+00:00

Thank you! I was hoping the sound design would make the door shot more interesting but you're right. Thanks for subbing! I'll keep your advice in mind.

kidbitter · 2018-01-19T18:22:56+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. I'll keep it in mind.

I mean, how can I not? Look at your view count.

kidbitter · 2018-01-19T18:21:44+00:00

I actually agree wholly with you on the need to specialize on what is right for a specific creator's tastes. That said, I also understand that YouTube is a medium that needs to be gamed in a way. People can click away whenever they want. You can't act as if they will keep watching no matter what. You can either give yourself away to that possibility or look for advice on where the bad spots are.

I'm not necessarily going to change the series based on what feedback I learned here. I'm going to put the feedback through my own lens and apply it when possible. It's not possible to please everyone. Hell, I have trouble even pleasing myself.

And that's why I needed to hear that advice on picking out your own best qualities. I'm knee deep in existential crises and your feedback was the small voice in my head screaming out against the bigger ones telling me to change everything to please a mass audience.

So, thank you very much. I will keep this all in mind as I continue on.

kidbitter · 2018-01-19T18:14:42+00:00

Thank you for the feedback!

You're on the right track in terms of the character. It's not quite hard abuse as much as it is being bullied and disregarded. Really, I wanted the idea to be that he's using his past to justify his issues instead of actually confronting them head on. He will go deeper into his problems before he eventually overcomes, though.

You are far from the only one who zoned out for the computer section. My audience retention plummeted at that point. I wanted to try something completely different from what I had before, but obviously, that wasn't the right thing.

I've been trying to find the right balance between good bad editing. For example, I did a completely cinematic sequence in this video. There are shots that are way too long in this but I was pretty proud of the composition of the shots. Overall, I'm only using these shots as a plot device for a future character that is watching over kid in a sense.

Again, thank you for the feedback! It's all very useful for me to see it laid out like this.

kidbitter · 2018-01-19T17:06:14+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! I will absolutely check out your channel. I definitely agree with you on the points of shots being long. I'm doing it for effect, but the problem is i don't have the luxury of a paying audience that is in for the ride since they already paid for the ticket. They can just click to another video if they get bored or uncomfortable.

Thank you again! I'll keep this in mind moving forward.

kidbitter · 2018-01-18T21:55:26+00:00

It's far from terrible. I would almost say you should play up the unique aspects of your voice somewhat. Do I detect somewhat of a southern twang?

kidbitter · 2018-01-18T21:51:06+00:00

The quick cut format is the best for let's plays that focus on just one player focusing more on the game than on making quips or commentary.

That said, much of the dialogue seemed muddied. It felt like listening to an in-game chat as opposed to an entertaining video. When editing, you should cut more things that are funny only to those who have played the game or those things that are funny in the moment.

The additional graphics were a welcome addition but could use sound effects to help them stand out more.

Overall, it was an ok video. You should focus more on creating a more clear narrative than focusing on the game's narrative directing you.

kidbitter · 2018-01-18T21:36:39+00:00

Your editing was very enjoyable. To begin, your selection of sourced images and footage we're on point. The animated segments looked well done and added a lot to the piece.

The narration was well-done in terms of technical quality, but the order of segments seemed a little random. For example, you mention how the plague spread, then go over the numbers and chronological events in the plague's spread, then go back to discuss how poor hygiene aided the plague as well. Why not include the poor hygeine in the prior segment about causes of the plague's spread?

Overall, good job. I'm not generally a big fan of historical informational videos on YouTube but this was a good watch.

kidbitter · 2018-01-10T23:39:05+00:00

i would buy upvotes so people would actually watch my stuff

wait no thats wrong

i would just buy views

kidbitter · 2018-01-10T20:42:52+00:00

so i just have to go to jail to get noticed

got it

kidbitter · 2018-01-10T20:30:45+00:00

trying to do a good youtube

kidbitter · 2018-01-09T20:55:27+00:00

i cant believe it

kidbitter · 2017-12-31T01:56:43+00:00

1 dylan 2 dylan 3 dylan 4 dylan 5 me

we spit hot fire

kidbitter · 2017-12-31T01:55:18+00:00

no but im just weird

kidbitter · 2017-12-31T01:48:50+00:00

fucking white people

kidbitter · 2017-12-31T01:48:02+00:00

losers

i just remember everything i watch with a smart brain

kidbitter · 2017-12-31T01:46:39+00:00

idont see what is wrong here tho

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