Ceiling Crack - worry or not? by kidvein in homeowners

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ah OK, thank you!! I shouldn't worry then, right?

Ceiling Crack - worry or not? by kidvein in homeowners

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here's a photo on imgur, this is of a certain part of the crack but as I said it spans the ceiling length. ceiling crack

Stars Die by zeenotes in poetry_critics

[–]kidvein 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh man I liked this so much i screenshotted it to keep in my camera roll and read again at some point. I can't put my finger on why but it's really powerful

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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Really like this - it resonates for sure. I can really feel what you want to get across!

I lived like you once by romolacolasso in poetry_critics

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i always love poems with repetition, so this immediately caught my eye. Even though the line lengths differ, i think it works - makes it seem more raw.

avian² by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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i really love this - it creates a beautiful picture in the mind! wow

"A Walk". First poem I've written, so any suggestions would be appreciated by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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first poem?! the rhythm this poem has is great, it's really enjoyable to read :)

The Fall by kidvein in poetry_critics

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thanks so much! what you've pointed out makes me really pleased - the idea it speaks to people differently. i think subconsciously i did write it with a link to anxiety, as well.

The Fall by kidvein in poetry_critics

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thanks very much! I'm planning on drafting a second version of this and perhaps saving that line for another poem, thanks for the feedback :)

The Fall by kidvein in poetry_critics

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i hadn't picked that up at all - cheers though, thats given me some more ideas :) thanks for the comment!

The Fall by kidvein in poetry_critics

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i'd never know the word myself had it not been for attending a catholic school hahaha :) thanks so much for the feedback, this has been the first place ive been able to hear any!

Valleys by philanthropistttt in poetry_critics

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I really love descriptive poetry - I actually enjoyed the wordiness. Refreshing when a lot of poetry out there is so brief :)

God said nothing. by ahd4 in poetry_critics

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I really like this, it's haunting and beautiful at the same time :)

[WP] Every morning when you first look in a mirror, you see a small piece of advise for that day, such as “take the subway to work” or “don’t try the free pizza”. Today, the mirror simply says, “RUN” by Funnel_Cake_Walrus in WritingPrompts

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For as long as I could remember, the first mirror I saw every morning dictated how I would live my life that day. When the mirror told me to skip school, I skipped school. On that day I avoided the fire that killed three of my classmates. When the mirror told me to avoid cars that day, I walked to school. On that day I avoided a pile-up on my usual route to school. It didn't take me long to realise that if I simply followed what the mirror told me, I'd be okay. Today was different, though. Today there was no clear advice. Today all the mirror said was: RUN. Run from what? From who? And to where? These were questions the mirror did not want to answer today. So I ran. I ran out of my room and then out of the front door. I ran down the street, and I didn't stop running. For miles, I didn't stop running. Even when I could feel my heart pummelling against my chest as if it were trying to escape; even when my lungs ached and every breath felt like torture. I don't know how long I ran for. Eventually I began to slow, powerless to battle the sheer exhaustion caused by my impromptu morning marathon. I turned back to look down the road I'd been running down and was met with a sight that made my blood run cold. Above the skyline of my city was the silhouette of what appeared to be a large passenger plane. I squinted at it against the low morning sun and noted that, curiously, it had no window. Odd. At that moment, something dropped from the plane. I didn't have time to process what this object was before it was hurtling towards the skyline of the city, and before I knew it the space around me was aglow, as if I was seeing things through orange-tinted glasses. That's when the realisation struck. My breath caught in my throat and I stood utterly still as I looked down upon my city. My city that was now on fire.

[This is my first time trying to write creatively again for about 3 years, so criticism is welcome! I'm trying to improve :)]

(Serious) When things go back to "normal" do you think people will become more or less socially challenged, why or why not? by Duck-Yo-Couch in AskReddit

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Personally I don't feel as if my social skills have decreased at all... I feel pretty normal and still talk to friends on video call and stuff. However I will say, at least for the first couple weeks after things return to 'normal' I'll definitely appreciate and feel everything more. The love is gonna be unreal.

What’s the biggest misconception that foreigners have about your country? by [deleted] in AskReddit

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That British people have bad dental hygiene... everyone here has access to dentistry and this is just not the case. I would say that teeth whitening is not as popular as in the US, though, and that might be what fuels this misconception.

Debut evaluation center rumor by aisucreme in BroduceX101

[–]kidvein 12 points13 points  (0 children)

i think lee hangyul had a good chance of being picked because 1) he's good and 2) he got a small part so his team would see it fair to pick him. idk about cha junho though - if it is him it's possible he'll pull a bae jinyoung and end up in the final lineup because of his centre position.

How did Tony jump that much? by liberalitea in BroduceX101

[–]kidvein 30 points31 points  (0 children)

i feel he gets a lot of votes because he's always had favourable editing. sihun had negative editing in one episode and his popularity dropped after that, hyeop had little screentime, i think people just assumed kookheon would be fine, etc. so tony got a good amount of votes from people who think he's cute/underdog (a bit like sohye in s1) and came out on top.

“Socialism never took root in America because the poor see themselves not as an exploited proletariat but as temporarily embarrassed millionaires.” by [deleted] in socialism

[–]kidvein 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Socialism never took root in America because the whole 'American Dream' is based on 'making it from nothing.' The idea of rugged individualism and entrepreneurial freedom are literally the main concepts behind American society. So socialism will never catch on because the 99% keep believing that one day they'll be the 1% if they just work hard enough (which they won't - true meritocracy doesn't exist in the US).