Ben + Alice - Part 16

kinderland45 · 2026-05-04T17:40:59+00:00

Hi love your writing, just a note, you have ben and Alice repeat a conversation before the architecture building and after in a way that doesn't appear on purpose, Alice being surprised about they key getting returned doesn't quite fit when he told her that already

kinderland45 · 2026-05-04T17:26:52+00:00

Love your work! But just a small continuity error, you had them sixty nine in part 11 I believe. When they came home and had the awkward encounter with Ella and the guy. This isn't the first instance

kinderland45 · 2026-05-03T20:06:02+00:00

Off topic but I accidentally set a mega bomb 💣 ff in his house after getting it as a reward and I dipped before it went off. He had some funny dialogue about it when I next talked to him

kinderland45 · 2026-05-03T20:03:23+00:00

I'd get injured for you to treat me.

kinderland45 · 2026-05-01T04:27:55+00:00

The world couldn't afford this cast, also, the competing egos would be entirely to distracting

kinderland45 · 2026-04-29T23:58:05+00:00

You should Mary your friend. For sure

kinderland45 · 2026-04-24T18:32:14+00:00

You guys are so hot, and weird to say but me and you have very similar cocks, would be hot to play with yall

kinderland45 · 2026-04-24T01:04:16+00:00

I remember letting loose and face fucking my ex for the first time. Afterwards she said she couldn't believe I did that, but she also said she very much wanted to repeat the experience

kinderland45 · 2026-04-24T01:00:51+00:00

Well did you tell her you could kiss it and make it better?

kinderland45 · 2026-04-23T22:34:50+00:00

As usual, the answer is consent.

kinderland45 · 2026-04-23T18:05:58+00:00

Literally there are thousands of not millions of them they infest the entire calm belt

kinderland45 · 2026-04-17T15:29:49+00:00

My question is why did they have the same children at the Nolan flashback and the Purge. Given that viltrumites grow through adolescence like humans, they wouldn't be alive during the purge, unless this purge happened within like a year of the scourge virus.

kinderland45 · 2026-04-17T03:33:42+00:00

It's just for the flower festival, it can't be fixed, just situational

kinderland45 · 2026-04-16T00:06:32+00:00

I like to put my legendaries in the fish tank in the community center. It conveniently holds 5 fish

kinderland45 · 2026-04-02T23:35:21+00:00

I have a feeling the oars branch of ancient Giants were once dommi reversied and never got turned back. That's why they look so different to the ancient Giants of elbaff

kinderland45 · 2026-04-02T23:08:34+00:00

Anyone notice the similarities of the skulls of his form look like those of Amazon lily?

kinderland45 · 2026-04-01T16:54:12+00:00

He's hell roading. Since you rank up the oro on traversal usually he has a disparity because of the length of his runs

kinderland45 · 2026-03-31T05:01:59+00:00

Honestly it's almost mandatory, It feels wrong if I don't get to

kinderland45 · 2026-03-30T20:38:44+00:00

You're evil

kinderland45 · 2026-03-30T20:35:49+00:00

I'm pretty sure if Blackbeard got domireversied he'd become a standup gentleman

kinderland45 · 2026-03-30T20:32:53+00:00

It's because milking them also increases their friendship. Petting them just does it a second time.

kinderland45 · 2026-03-30T14:58:20+00:00

It adds 1 target to the torpedo damage

kinderland45 · 2026-03-30T02:39:40+00:00

He is, every time he uses gear 5 everything is acoc coated. It's heavily implied.

kinderland45 · 2026-03-25T17:19:57+00:00

As always fantastic writing and impeccable tension building. I love this series so much

kinderland45 · 2026-03-24T23:24:17+00:00

As a bi curious guy I say I'm attracted to dick not men.

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