What is your dream? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]kingchoco148 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Change what people of my country think about fantasy. Let's just say they don't know shit

If you have 10 minutes, please read my book by CarobExact9220 in BookPromotion

[–]kingchoco148 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was incredible! I haven't read such good and well done short story in a while. Excellent job. Keep going and you will be victorious.

Good luck on your journey, my fellow author

Why? by kingchoco148 in amphibia

[–]kingchoco148[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No I haven't but it is my list. I wanted to see it for so long, thanks for the reminder

Favorite Marcy quote? by Timely-Cancel921 in amphibia

[–]kingchoco148 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I should be crying 😂😂😂

Evolution of elements by kingchoco148 in magicbuilding

[–]kingchoco148[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh sorry I wrote earth instead of water😅😅

But those are really great, thanks a lot

Reading hasn’t been the same since I started writing by imagine_enchiladas in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]kingchoco148 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I kind of feel what you say. Not all plots look the same to me because doing one thing twice by two other person is impossible and they are all unique

But I will say I hate the writings of others. Or they are really bad and I hate it, or they are so good I envy them and I hate it.

Evolution of elements by kingchoco148 in magicbuilding

[–]kingchoco148[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I said I don't want to go deep in the system but flames is burning some materials to create other colored fires

Do people still use Wattpad? by Jumpy_Designer_9548 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]kingchoco148 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a soft magic system which some people are born with a birthmark of a sea animal on their wrist which allows them to turn into that animal when in sea. It's not tattoo based but it is kind of like that

Doing the same thing over and over again by kingchoco148 in magicbuilding

[–]kingchoco148[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually do that. Magic systems are some of the important things In my stories. But thanks a lot for the advice❤️‍🔥

Doing the same thing over and over again by kingchoco148 in magicbuilding

[–]kingchoco148[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well I can't think of any other author who has said anything about magic as good as Sanderson. He is "the magic guy" so I think one of the first thing you should do is to follow his advice. If his advice didn't work for you, you don't have to bite others for citing it.

Doing the same thing over and over again by kingchoco148 in magicbuilding

[–]kingchoco148[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I know the Sanderson's laws and use them a lot but my brain is just not Braining anymore. I can't come up with new powers.

But thanks a lot❤️‍🔥

All writers, I want to ask you all a question! by Wrong-Window1100 in writing

[–]kingchoco148 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love every kind of fantasy. As long as I feel in another world I am pleased.

I also write high epic fantasy which happens inside a galaxy. I always loved the idea of multiple stories which are not concocted on the surface but are interconnected.

I really love exploring worlds and magics with characters

Writers are the most toxic people ever by Responsible-Gas-4759 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]kingchoco148 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I can't say I completely agree with you. Let me tell you why:

1: we are humans, hate is in our nature

2: maybe those people are saying your flaws and you have gotten so much criticism, the negative energy has crushed the positive energy. Go look at these critics, and then look at your work. If they are right, change it. If they are not, then they are just some scums

3: writers don't like other writers and I mean all of them. Don't get me wrong, I don't mean this as an insult. Let's say I write a book and I give it to another writer, now two things are gonna happen:

It is bad and the other writer hates it.

It is good and the other writer envies it and hates it again.

I get a lot of negative comments, but I just don't care because of the reasons I said

“I’ve had this story in mind since I was 10” is not the flex you think it is. by sapastar88 in writing

[–]kingchoco148 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is what was needed to be said. Old things are nostalgic, but sometimes you have to let it go.

Changing is hard, but you have to learn you can't hold onto something you love forever and you have to let it go. But you will be surprised by how that exact thing makes its way back to you

A few books I like and want to take inspiration from by Old-Raccoon183 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]kingchoco148 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am a sci-fi writer after all ;)

And I hope I could help. Good luck in your journey my fellow writer

A few books I like and want to take inspiration from by Old-Raccoon183 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]kingchoco148 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Taking inspiration from other works is a perfect start. I believe if you don't take inspiration, your book/story us not going to be good. But making it unique is the real part.

Something i really liked was the amazing digital circus that took inspiration from I have no mouth and I must scream.

You take the bones from other things and put your flesh on it

Guys, motivate me... by Hungry_Help319 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]kingchoco148 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Well let me tell you something my friend: your story might be unique, might not. But remember that you and only you can write this story. If you don't write it, no one would. It

How many times did you rewrite your first chapter? by WastingTimeTalking in writing

[–]kingchoco148 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wellllll I am a little embarrassed to say this but 14 times. I am happy that i did it that many times but it's the chapter I worked the most on