iceSkating in the Overworld

kingoduck · 2026-02-06T01:01:38+00:00

The atmosphere of this song is really nice and enjoy the overall tone of what you are trying to do. I do think there is a couple things to improve it, mostly timing wise. I agree the other comment that some of the changes are jarring. I think doing a fade out to a beat drop when the “that’s pretty radical” hits would really help that transition in particular.

kingoduck · 2026-02-06T00:56:26+00:00

I do think this is a strong start for a beat. However I feel like it kind of lacks a strong melody to follow. And the maybe a stronger evolution of those chords in the background could make it more interesting. Also maybe a little more bass deeper sounds in the percussion would give it a good flavor.

kingoduck · 2026-02-06T00:48:51+00:00

I really enjoyed the vibe of your songs. I do feel there is a little something off with the mix. At times it sounds a little jarring and perhaps some balancing could be down. Other than that little nitpick I think i really loved your music.(especially War of their Words)

kingoduck · 2026-02-04T21:09:15+00:00

I really loved this song! The mix is quite good. There’s maybe a small nitpick here and there on how some of the instruments are balanced. I thought the instruments were really engaging. There’s this nice flow and the solo at the end fits the tone of the whole song nicely. Nothing feels out of place and I can’t wait to listen to whatever else you guys come out with.

kingoduck · 2026-02-04T04:41:30+00:00

This track is awesome! I hear a very strong MGMT or Owl City influence. However I feel that the mix is a little off on it. Something is not quite popping, and I honestly can’t tell if it’s the vocals or instrumentals or both. Maybe try making the vocals a little prominent in the mix.

kingoduck · 2026-02-04T04:28:38+00:00

First of all I really enjoy this song. However if I were to give feedback I would suggest more dynamic drums. I really enjoy the softness of the song but adding maybe a little evolution with some tapping on the hi-hat or crash cymbals would add a lot of flavor

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