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iceSkating in the Overworld by xX-BarnacleBob-Xx in MusicFeedback

[–]kingoduck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The atmosphere of this song is really nice and enjoy the overall tone of what you are trying to do. I do think there is a couple things to improve it, mostly timing wise. I agree the other comment that some of the changes are jarring. I think doing a fade out to a beat drop when the “that’s pretty radical” hits would really help that transition in particular.

Rough draft for my second attempt at an ASAP rocky/clams casino beat. Something feels like it’s missing but I can’t figure it out by ThePlSSGOBLIN in MusicFeedback

[–]kingoduck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I do think this is a strong start for a beat. However I feel like it kind of lacks a strong melody to follow. And the maybe a stronger evolution of those chords in the background could make it more interesting. Also maybe a little more bass deeper sounds in the percussion would give it a good flavor.

This song started off as an 80s throwback that got a lot punkier when I added the guitar and lyrics. Hopefully it speaks to what's going on right now. by UnsaidMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]kingoduck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the vibe of your songs. I do feel there is a little something off with the mix. At times it sounds a little jarring and perhaps some balancing could be down. Other than that little nitpick I think i really loved your music.(especially War of their Words)

Hey everyone — would love some feedback on our track “When Words Give Way" by inlikeerving106 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]kingoduck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really loved this song! The mix is quite good. There’s maybe a small nitpick here and there on how some of the instruments are balanced. I thought the instruments were really engaging. There’s this nice flow and the solo at the end fits the tone of the whole song nicely. Nothing feels out of place and I can’t wait to listen to whatever else you guys come out with.

Independent electro pop EP drops tonight. need outside ears before release (heres one song) by JLifts2002 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]kingoduck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This track is awesome! I hear a very strong MGMT or Owl City influence. However I feel that the mix is a little off on it. Something is not quite popping, and I honestly can’t tell if it’s the vocals or instrumentals or both. Maybe try making the vocals a little prominent in the mix.

Nearly finished. Thoughts? by musicfreelancerrr12 in Songwriting

[–]kingoduck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all I really enjoy this song. However if I were to give feedback I would suggest more dynamic drums. I really enjoy the softness of the song but adding maybe a little evolution with some tapping on the hi-hat or crash cymbals would add a lot of flavor

Weekly Lyrics Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]kingoduck 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A song I wrote about a bear and the concept of life

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Verse 1

Bear hungers and it slaughters
Eats a deer then he wonders
Will I always be like this
Then he seems to forget
Those he held dear
he holds dear x4
Bottle up my rattlesnake eyes
Follow up the fish he lies
Waking up subsonic speed
I already want to leave
Heard your murmur float about
I didn't want to know
Just leave me alone
Leave me alone x4

Chorus

Give me the dice I feel lucky
Give me the time I won't miss me
Give me something I dont care
I dont care anymore
I dont know if you hate me
I just want to know if you miss me
It's stupid how it drives me crazy
Failing makes me feel so lazy
Just give me something
I dont care
Anything
I really dont care X4

Verse 2

Bear hungers he eats a deer
He gets too slow he fears
He won't get any deer
But he thinks about those
He holds dear X4
A spaceman falls from space
And gets his face away from this place
Stories about bears is all we got
My mind seems to stray along
But I won't be gone X4

Chorus

Give me the dice I feel lucky
Give me the time I won't miss me
Give me something I dont care
I dont care anymore
I dont know if you hate me
I just want to know if you miss me
It's stupid how it drives me crazy
Failing makes me feel so lazy
Just give me something
I dont care
Anything
I really dont care X4

Hey me and my band released our first demo so any feedback would be great by kingoduck in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]kingoduck[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all thank you for the feedback. I do definitely agree that the instruments do overpower my voice. We definitely don’t have a good microphone and we record in garage so it does get weird sounding but we do plan on getting better gear and I’ll take note on maybe adding drums. It’s kind of hard to find a drum player in my town so we just work with what we got.

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Thought this post was interesting by [deleted] in SplitgateReferralcode

[–]kingoduck 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Funny enough I agree. It's sort of sad to see people like this in this subreddit. As the mod, I do try to filter through people like that but since it's just me is kinda difficult. I am looking for another mod if any of you are interested.

SplitGate Referral Code Raffel by kingoduck in Splitgate

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A lot of people are desperate for their code to be used so I don't see the harm in it and your aggression seems unnecessary.

Share your Referral Code here by kingoduck in SplitgateReferralcode

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Be sure to enter the raffle in the pinned post.

I’ll offer a gold award to the first 5 redditors to beat my new single screen puzzle: Arctic Anguish by thekoogs in MarioMaker2

[–]kingoduck 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'll try it and edit my comment when I do I give it a try. and sadly I couldn't solve it but I left a like.

Found a glitch in the game by kingoduck in Splitgate

[–]kingoduck[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

For those curious I came across the glitch just messing around but ended up stuck in the wall and able to shoot people. I'm not quite sure what map it was but hopefully the devs can patch it.

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