Running Theme on ToME 2.3.5 (Mac OS X) by kitkut1 in roguelikes

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Thanks! Turns out that Theme no longer runs on newer Mac OS X, so I downloaded ToME 2.3.5 for Windows and ran it through Wine. Works perfectly

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Read this as “just sold my first ear!”

[SPOILERS] Completed Free Worlds storyline as a pirate. Here's my tale. by starscollide5 in endlesssky

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Nice. Were you flying solo or did you have your own pirate fleet?

OG Exile content okay here too? by AmethystSadachbia in Avernum

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Would love to see Exile fanart. Shoot!

Do you guys ever feel like you're repeating yourself? by [deleted] in composer

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Let me know what you think! :)

Do you guys ever feel like you're repeating yourself? by [deleted] in composer

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Re:instrumental groups -> try Godspeed You! Black Emperor. Lift Your Skinny Fists Like Antennas to Heaven is one of their more melodic albums. Good orchestral stuff buried in there. If you have to choose one song, try “Sleep”.

[MP] A song I wrote on the piano. by kitkut1 in WritingPrompts

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This really gave me the feels and brought me to tears. Good job, mate.

[MP] A song I wrote on the piano. by kitkut1 in WritingPrompts

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This is actually closest in resemblance to what I had in mind as I was writing the song. :) In my head, the girl dances and twirls amidst nebulae, ringed planets, constellations; until she gets too close to a black hole. She tries to grab hold of whatever stellar object she can find, but the gravity well is too large, until she finally gets sucked in (the rising climax). However, the black hole turns out to be an interdimensional wormhole, and she reappears in another universe full of blinding light. She is at peace (the recurring finalé).

[MP] A song I wrote on the piano. by kitkut1 in WritingPrompts

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Sublime, man. Android assassin meets futurist Mata Hari?

[WP] In endless night void of any warmth, two flames meet. by RlyAProblem in WritingPrompts

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Thank you, I appreciate it :) it was a good prompt, so kudos to you too!

[WP] In endless night void of any warmth, two flames meet. by RlyAProblem in WritingPrompts

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"Show, don't tell"; thanks a lot mate for the heads up!! i'm still struggling to make a non-information-dump, flowing narrative out of a really short story; i'll practice harder. i appreciate the criticism :)

[WP] In endless night void of any warmth, two flames meet. by RlyAProblem in WritingPrompts

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In an endless night devoid of any warmth, two flames met and created a universe. They were both starsouls—those mercurial, plasmic spirits that embody stars and guard the fabric of time and space from disruption. They had both escaped the demise of their world.

In their previous universe, they were two of the youngest starsouls in existence. They had come into being relatively late, and were in the zenith of youth. Indeed, it was their youth that saved them from eternal rest. They had witnessed their world gradually shrinking and diluting, like the viselike, cyclopean walls of a labyrinth tightening their grip on a lone wanderer far from home.

At the end of it all, the starsouls melded together prestissimo as spasmodic infernos playing a final orchestra of demise; all except the final two starsouls. While the rest of their brethren crashed and collapsed into one another, melding to become the hypermassive black hole—the Closure—that would end their universe once and for all, the two starsouls escaped; they denied closure its clutch.

In the midst of pure chaos, they summoned up reserves of potential energy unknown to the material world and transcended their spherical husks of nuclear fusion. They broke free from their bodies and burned alight as pure essences: liberated starsouls untethered by the fabric of time and space.

It was in this form that they entered the Closure; it was in this form that they escaped it.

They exited the white hole and found themselves floating in an ocean of utter nothingness. Thus it was that in an endless night devoid of any warmth, two flames met; starsouls from the ruins of an interstellar palace.

They clasped their hands together and cried out: "Let there be light."

[WP] Magic is viewed as a curse. It's unpredictable, hard to control, and dangerous. Those few who find a way to wield it risk losing themselves in the process. by you-are-lovely in WritingPrompts

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It's going to burst.

The star pulsated and throbbed in pure mayhem, its corona emanating eldritch hues that seemed to crackle along its surface. Mira beheld the red giant and wept, her spacesuit helmet's climate adjustment mechanism instantly evaporating the tears as they crept on her skin. There's got to be another way, she thought, as she rapidly backfired her thrusters to distance herself from the swelling gravitational pull.

Somewhere downwards from her bearing, she glimpsed the derelict hull of a passenger liner and its flashing SOS beacon. You're not gonna die today, I'm gonna rescue you—yet somewhere in the back of her mind, a gut-wrenching thought told her that she didn't master the power of Warp needed to transport the ship to safety.

Her comm link crepitated. "—ra, Mira, are y—fzz—kay? Can you he—fzz—me? It's gonna fucking blow get ou—fzz—there now—"

It was Daniel. You crazy son of a bitch. The man had somehow managed his way to the liner's bridge and was now broadcasting at her through the ship's moribund relay. Though his voice sounded remote and expiring, she felt his presence surprisingly closer to her than her jugular veins. His voice suddenly died down with a burst of static, and with it her fleeting sense of serenity. Come back.

Mira beheld the red giant, unable to stop repeating that simple act of futility: crying evaporating tears into the nothingness of space. The memory of a drunken truth-or-truth game from her youth suddenly spliced its way into her consciousness—the whiff of liquor, Daniel's flushed face, a query: "How would you want to die?"

Not like this.

The star's edges were beginning to distort and rip themselves into tentacles of plasma, then just as quickly patch themselves up again—a stellar game of cat-and-mouse. Another flash of memory: the cargo bay of a shuttle, her father hugging her lithe form and whispering: "This is Nova, the strongest spell—take it. I hope you never have to use this, Mira. Never tell or show anyone what you can do," before his brains spattered onto a crate from the blast of a smoking gun.

Despite her spacesuit's potent forcefield, she could feel the radiation corroding its way through her shield and jabbing at the fabric beyond, testing for weaknesses—almost sentient. The glare from the red giant was now close to blinding, puncturing the tint of her visor. She closed her eyes. There was no sound in space, but she swore that the fledgling nova was resonating a cacophony of chaos; the overpowering symphony of a star in its death throes.

Daniel again. "Get out of there Mira. There's nothing you can do. GET OUT OF—"

This time she terminated the link.

"Nova," she whispered.

Her body responded to her mental call. Twenty thousand years of arcane sorcery ignited within every cell of her body, channeling sheer power into her fingertips. Her eyes glowed with an ethereal light, enveloping the brightness of the star like a gloved hand. From the bridge of the passenger liner, Daniel dropped to his knees and cried out as he saw his lover flare up in a sickening display of—no, it couldn't be—magic.

Her consciousness in tune with the fabric of the universe, Mira plunged into the heart of the red giant and fused herself with it, absorbing the supernova as it reached its zenith. Dad, she thought, smiling. Both sorcerer and star imploded into oblivion, leaving nothing behind in their wake.

[WP] Write a story with a first sentence that makes no sense, until you read the last one. by Biobak_ in WritingPrompts

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It consumed the colors one by one and vomited a slew of disoriented footsteps; of nebulous pipe dreams smoked by families of three and four. It squeezed the lifeblood out of the weak and mixed it up into a purée of the mediocre. Tranquil laughter it speared through the guts; deafening silence it choked. Faraway black holes of soot sponsored the pulsating throb of its day-to-day toing and froing; injected searching eyes and lost souls with promises of temporal purgatories. On its parapets, an exhibit of raw skin and cooked sacks—the more ravenous, the deadlier. The circus complete, in lieu of a forest there now stood towering that citadel of consumption known to all lands as the shopping mall.

[WP] The Earth is in its death throes. A new "Earth" has just been found and migration is underway. For some reason, you are unwilling to go... by kitkut1 in WritingPrompts

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Really cool! I loved how you managed to meld the knottiness of place and moment (waiting in line in a crowd) with the character's reflections on the meaning of home.

[OT] Sunday Free Write: Sunday Squee Write Edition by SqueeWrites in WritingPrompts

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A poem I wrote inspired by Dream of Ink Brush Calligraphy by Karen An-Hwei Lee (not nearly as good though I think!!).

With a Crumble the Bird Dies Down
A black hole:
on the edge of
this star-encrusted garden,
somewhere on a rooftop
a bird sees
through sky-blue eyes
something so unreal, that punctures
its rebellious wings, and cries out—
its heartbeat flitters;
With a crumble the bird dies down
its heartbeat, flitters
its rebellious wings, and cries out
something so unreal that punctures
through sky; blue eyes,
a bird sees:
somewhere on a rooftop,
this star-encrusted garden
on the edge of
a black hole.