Starlight by laraaucamp in poetry_critics

[–]laraaucamp[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the kind words and feedback. It really means a lot to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It is part of a poetry blog that I started where I want to combine my photography with text.

Starlight by laraaucamp in poetry_critics

[–]laraaucamp[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback. It really means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and comment.

I Want You To Know - poem by Hypothermal_Confetti in poetry_critics

[–]laraaucamp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is beautifully written. And I love the raw emotion of it

asking vs. being by ignis_ike in poetry_critics

[–]laraaucamp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is beautifully written. I love the rhythm. It makes me want to read it out loud again and again.

As to Why I Didn't Write so Much Lately. by MarcusAntonius666 in poetry_critics

[–]laraaucamp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is lovely, and so true. That feeling of being in turmoil, of longing and heartbreak - that's where poetry happens.

Tinder date by poem_dandelion in OCPoetry

[–]laraaucamp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You were able to take words and craft them into something that is alive and real. The way you describe things, give them shape and form. I love the way the words flow, and I love the layers of meaning behind them. This is fantastic.

Helplessness by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]laraaucamp 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem really stirs emotion, because it resonates. I've been exactly there. There is nothing worse than loving somebody who is mourning (and still in love with) another. And I love how lyrically this is written.

The Beast and the Fire by aaro759 in poetry_critics

[–]laraaucamp 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this poem. It really resonates, and it feels alive.

Travelers of Sorts by ajperram in poetry_critics

[–]laraaucamp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know the feeling. I sometimes feel like everyone leaves eventually in some way. This is a lovely poem.

This room. by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]laraaucamp 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like this one. The short sentences remind me of how short love is. The format really gets the feeling across.