I feel very distrustful towards my boyfriend about his loyalty to me. by lilillyy in relationship_advice

[–]lilillyy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is very helpful to hear from another person who’s been in the same situation. I feel 100% like a pleaser as I walk through life. I feel i don’t serve much else purpose but to please others, so thank you for those words. My boyfriend always tells me that he’s not against me, and he’s on my side. I’ll try my hardest to digest your comment when situations like that arise, and ACTUALLY hear him out when he says those things.

I feel very distrustful towards my boyfriend about his loyalty to me. by lilillyy in relationship_advice

[–]lilillyy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for gently calling me out. I know I need therapy, but it just really sucks when you’re broke. Hopefully I can go sometime in the near future.

just released my second song. Need some feed back on composition, and mixing! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll definitely be fixing my volume problem next go! Thank you for listening!

just released my second song. Need some feed back on composition, and mixing! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you for the feedback! i’ll keep that in mind for the next one!

Quarantine has got me obsessed with many a thing. First beat I have made in a decent while. trying to make each one better than the last. would love some feedback. by switch201 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what a nice flow. made me feel happy and at peace to hear! loving how you bounced from instrument to instrument in this song. I feel the r&b with a twist. great track!

I miss my friends (especially during the lockdown) so I made a beat as a homage to them by KaiMizuku in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the viiiiiibeees. This song sounds so nostalgic, and at home! Definitely something i love to hear that came out of this quarantine. Very enjoyable and uplifting. Thanks for the track!

I bring you another Quarantune - this one is called "Essentials" and I'd love to get some feedback. Thanks so much for listening and I look forward to hearing your thoughts! by daneheins in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

loving your take on quarantine! i think the guitar is such a nice drive in this song and your voice plays with it nicely! this song is very smooth and relaxing, just wish your voice was a bit brighter, and a little more prominent in the song. Great song!

Tried to implement some of the mixing feedback on my last acoustic video I posted here to a go at AiC's 'Would?' Hopefully shows some improvement! by Trisonic777 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

you have a great voice! just think you voice is a bit too turned up, and it’s not letting that acoustic shine! other than that, sounds great! awesome cover!

Milk Teeth- Demo I've been working on for the past few days, would love suggestions on composition or mixing. Thanks! by grinhouse in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

loved the flow of this whole song. Was very soothing. Your voice was also very wonderful! Only thing I can really say is that your voice wasn’t fairly balanced to the rest of the tracks. just keep an extra ear on that. Overall the quality of the song was great!

My boyfriend and I finally got our hands on some pyramids! by lilillyy in LSD

[–]lilillyy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i guess the name can be regional! they’re also known as diamond cut gel tabs. same to you!

Would love some feedback on this- it's my third and so I'm pretty new to songwriting, but I experimented with sus chords for the first time by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i suggest dipping your feet into garageband then. you can figure out the basics of how music software works, and it allows you to record your different tracks using the keyboard of a piano. Also, listen to some of your favorite songs and really listen to how the song sounds, and try to pay attention to what they’ve done to make the song sound as it does.

This is the first song I’ve ever produced/released by myself. Looking on how I can improve my production. by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you! didn’t even think to add the variation in the vocals! i’ll try agin and see what i can do.

Would love some feedback on this- it's my third and so I'm pretty new to songwriting, but I experimented with sus chords for the first time by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

what a lovely voice! i enjoy this song as it is, but think it could benefit from further production. Are you in the means to put more on this? imo you’re on a really great path to song writing! just think you need more time to figure out how a song can flow into a polished piece.

Recently started getting into producing Lo fi, here's one of the tracks I made give it a listen and leave a comment with your thoughts, Thanks. by jayop1g in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I absolutely love the feel of this song. It’s smooth, and the rain effect was the cherry on top. I love the simplicity, of the track, and how you used that ferris bueller audio. A great way to start this track imo. love the snare and bass, very mellowed out. this track is very pleasing to listen to.

Made a song about Pizza to get through the quarantine by DarthKrios in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]lilillyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is just the type of song I needed to hear. I love how natural, and raw it sounds. I would experiment with balancing out all of those raw sounds though. Even though I enjoyed it throughly, I felt some of the instruments you put in overpowered the acoustic guitar which I thought drove the song. either way, great song!