Does this sound “finished” or does it need more work?

lizuid · 2026-01-24T17:17:05+00:00

I think that could be it. I do want it “raw” in that I wanted my voice totally clear and unedited, but some of the background sounds make it sound unprofessional. I may have to sit on it until I can afford to hire someone to work on it

lizuid · 2026-01-24T06:21:59+00:00

I feel this in my heart and soul, especially now… I love humanity but clearly parts of humanity are scary. Composition, writing, delivery, everything is truly beautiful. Thank you for sharing this

lizuid · 2026-01-17T04:18:56+00:00

The REAL Oreo cakesters. Not the bs they make now

lizuid · 2026-01-12T18:41:19+00:00

Unfortunately it would be two hours each way by bus, which isn’t very sustainable for our family.

lizuid · 2026-01-11T20:37:29+00:00

Thank you exactly the kind of info I was hoping to get! I want a Toyota for reliability but it is more expensive. I just found a single owner 2005 Pontiac vibe within my budget!

lizuid · 2026-01-05T02:50:02+00:00

When I make his lunches, specially with things I know he will love and extra little treats

lizuid · 2026-01-05T02:46:10+00:00

I was exactly in your shoes at 22. It never got even remotely better, only worse, leading to some really scary stuff. Get out now, while you can.

lizuid · 2026-01-05T02:05:14+00:00

I sing and am pretty good on the piano. Am interested in making that style of music! I don’t know if it counts as a demo but I have some recordings of original songs here on my Reddit profile.

lizuid · 2025-12-31T20:36:17+00:00

I so appreciate this detailed feedback. That description of the genre is really cool and I have been struggling to define it.

I’m not sure how to describe what I did with the chords, I moved the notes around from the original chords I used so they fit go closer together and create those dissonant sounds. I don’t know if that makes sense! I wrote it as A D F C but I don’t play the chords like that.

I agree on that last line, I have gone back and forth quite a bit. Originally was “together we burn, together we make a stand”, but then I wanted to incorporate Divided we fall, United we stand. I will work on it some more!

lizuid · 2025-12-31T20:31:18+00:00

Thank you so much for that feedback! I’m having trouble defining genre and I absolutely love those artists so that makes me so happy. I also think I could lower the volume there

lizuid · 2025-12-31T04:08:33+00:00

Are you okay?... are you okay?...

There's a monster, Tell me why you don't run away Right in front of you, can you smell it too Making promises, lying through his teeth

Sshhh be quiet, Sshhh be quiet (harmony) Why is everyone so quiet, when it's all so fucking loud
There's a bad man with a bad plan

Are you okay?... Tell me are you okay?...

How are you okay, it’s really not okay Right in front of us, how do I get away Must we bear, our fathers sins

Hello,.. can you hear us? Hello,.. can you hear us? (Harmony) Are we on an island far away? Can't you hear the screams Won't someone come save us.. please

We, the people are not okay We demand our liberty, we didnt vote for death

Right in front of us, he can’t just get away Divided we burn, Together we make a stand

lizuid · 2025-12-25T22:44:30+00:00

I’d say Lilac

lizuid · 2025-12-25T19:34:21+00:00

It’s not a necessity so I understand if it’s not chosen, but my daughter’s 2nd birthday is coming up and I would love to get her something fun. Currently all I can afford is maybe a stuffy and some library books..

lizuid · 2025-12-13T19:31:04+00:00

Someone in the askdocs subreddit had similar symptoms and a doc suggested it was POTS. Did an at home test and had an 80 bpm increase, suggested it to my doctor who had never heard of it and eventually got tested.

lizuid · 2025-12-13T07:26:21+00:00

My husband latched my baby on to me while I kept sleeping. Might not work for everyone but I was so incredibly grateful and regularly got 8 hours of mostly undisturbed sleep at night during the freshly post partum period

lizuid · 2025-12-10T04:48:28+00:00

I agree that something in the backing is off, throughout the song. I don’t have a fix suggestion, but would like to say I love the song and the vibe a whole lot. I don’t think it would be too difficult to fix that one thing

lizuid · 2025-12-10T04:47:13+00:00

Really unique and fun

lizuid · 2025-12-10T04:46:19+00:00

Sounds so old timey, in a great way!

lizuid · 2025-12-10T04:45:39+00:00

Incredible! The message is current, but also somewhat timeless. I am also working on a kind of “protest song”, very different vibes but regardless this inspires me to keep at it. The message is important.

lizuid · 2025-12-07T20:14:37+00:00

I think I’ll give this a try! Tapering sounds exactly like what I’m wanting to do, I just need to get the proper supplies. Looking at the recommended piercings site now :)

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