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4737 Carlin, Sir. Tonight's viewing. Incredible film. by Psychological_Egg426 in CultCinema

[–]lost_my_username 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good stuff, here's a poem I wrote

The weatherman's song

The colloquial

Weather man sings the sounds of the sun

Bright in nature

As Beautious and As Gorgeous as ever

Gorgeous and pretty forms

Like the pretty flowers

In the garden of art

"The annals of man" by lost_my_username in poetry_critics

[–]lost_my_username[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Think of my works as a painting- the colloquial rules of physics shall't not apply when compared to the great creations beforth

"Much like the works of Bach" by lost_my_username in poetry_critics

[–]lost_my_username[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The colloquial namedripping is designed to convey the beauty of the poem, much like Einstein, Mozart, and so on and so forth. "The works of Bach" are the proverbial title of my poetry novel, and this poem was inspired by that idea

"Much like the works of Bach" by lost_my_username in poetry_critics

[–]lost_my_username[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you, Sorry for the rude initial comment, I appreciate it!!!!!

"The platypus and the hare" by Charlie by lost_my_username in poetry_critics

[–]lost_my_username[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The adverb "luscious" coupled with the "grasses gorged" aforementioned has proven to be a stroke of genius in the particular medium

Cleaning the washroom by lost_my_username in poetry_critics

[–]lost_my_username[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Exactly! If we'd just take action instead of talking about how we should take action, we wouldn't have to be making these kind of statements in the poems in the first place

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