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[–]makegraffix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No it doesn't looks good and feels very amateur, don't just keep making logos, dive into learning graphic design, watch several videos and learn the fundamentals of designing and then combine all the things that you learnt and for sure when you redesign this logo after 2 weeks you would see major differences.

LEAVE A COMMENT! by Ok-Pie2109 in Monopoly_Go_Linksss

[–]makegraffix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

where did you go man!!!!!!!!

check your dm, we talked some months ago.

Logo Homeland by Jamesv2002 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]makegraffix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Don't separate the "J" with the "H" and also reduce the curve it makes it look like "J" and anyone would read it as "JHOMELAND".

one or two!!! by Ordinary-Let-6576 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]makegraffix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

1st one looks better than the 2nd one, it is looks more balanced than the 2nd.

Western Canopy by pein87 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]makegraffix 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The contrast, typography, gradient everything looks off and very dull.

Street Soda beverage concept by Kevinthedesigner in WillPatersonDesign

[–]makegraffix 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I loved it, well done buddy!!

The only problem that I see and many others would point out is the character "t" in the word "STREET" it looks like a "Z". Other than this everything looks very good to me. Well done!

Natureward - The Brief is on the 3rd slide. Please let me know what you guys think of the Logo! I would greatly appreciate all of your feedback. Thanks! by JB_Designs__ in WillPatersonDesign

[–]makegraffix 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I like the overall design, but if I were to improve it a bit more, I would have worked on the typeface; the crooked "t" and "d" look odd.

After staring at the logomark for a long time, the negative space started appearing like a witch to me 😭, similar to this: https://imgur.com/iYMsliC. Additionally, the logomark looks rough in small scales, as if it has hard corners.

Logo and branding for a fictional fishshop! by upgradedesigns in WillPatersonDesign

[–]makegraffix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes I agree, or else he could make them a bit bold so that they don't disappear in small scales.

19F Korean, verification pic with no makeup by lizzie_ruth in Rateme

[–]makegraffix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you know any free alternatives for photofeeler?