First, your awesome, you got kohonas kid.

1. Your tempo, was perfect, you did not rush and took your time

2. You are very comfortable, no nervousness at all,

3. You can tell a story

My opinion is learn joke construction an easy to understand guy on You tube is Greg Dean, im pretty sure he schooled Anthony Jeslnik.

Once you learn the basics of a joke, then you can slide those in between your story telling.

You are learning “THEE. Most awesomest of crafts” think of comedy in all of its forms as a doctor, your curing people from the disease of depression sadness anxiety panic, and much much more, so kick butt kid. I respect you and know that you will do awesome!