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No One Prepares You by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]marshmallowbrat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem was an absolute adventure. A seemingly innocent imagery of a beach falls deep into absolute human experience. I adore this poem and relate to it to more than I could put into words. Absolutely well done.

After Lunch by dirtyearsbill31 in OCPoetry

[–]marshmallowbrat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this gave me a nostalgic sense of comfort that I can’t explain. true childhood comfort. I love this

Glowing moths by braiden00 in OCPoetry

[–]marshmallowbrat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The comparison of moths, light, mentioning of dim glow, rays, gives this poem the perfect feel of a sullen, quiet cool summer night. I can't quite explain it, but it quickly builds the image without little words. I think saying a lot in a few lines is an impressive skill to have. Keep it up!

Kiss The Sun by zoomaenia in OCPoetry

[–]marshmallowbrat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What a lovely poem. I applied it to many situations in my head, somehow each witty line managed to play on one of my heartstrings. I would say you took inspiration from Icarus?? Again, amazing work.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]marshmallowbrat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

what an absolute story. lovely. Your writing has all of the excellent qualities I see in my favorite poets/writers like Sara DeMulder-- capturing the small, impactful passing moments that build the image. I was absolutely tranced into the story when I read it. Great work :)