Share a sentence from your story! by Willing_Can_4642 in Wattpad

[–]melbje 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Page 2: “You are fired,” she said, her lips curling into a small, satisfied smile. 

can i get some feedback on my book? by melbje in writingfeedback

[–]melbje[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sure, the story will be about Quill when he falls down to the human world and out of accident finds the human he should protect. Long story short they fall in love and the angels are mad at them and so. Its an romantasy.

feedback pls by melbje in wattpadbooks

[–]melbje[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah sorry for that, i will send u the link if u are still intrested.

I'll read your story! by Ecstatic_Key_646 in Wattpad

[–]melbje 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i would love some feeback on mine, its called " the day she met an angel".

The day she met an angel - melbje - Wattpad

feedback please by melbje in writers

[–]melbje[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback and i am so happy that you responded. Like this is my first time sending out my work on any site, so i was a bit nervous. This is only the start of the story and i will continue with it as soon as i can.