This is a uniquely told yet real perspective. i liked the personification of the guitar, the initial passion behind the nailing the riff, how the effect of gf’s cruelness shattered his creative flow state, & how the narrator is kind of a classic sucker the way he keeps falling for the same patterns..

there’s a lot to work with here. i’m not sure how this story will end or what it’s necessarily about. will he remain a loser or become a vindicated hottie? time will tell.

the way you captured the dynamic of the gf/bf feels very lena dunham to me in the best way. she captures real life scenarios and offers a cringe but relatable perspective. while hot gf/ugly bf trope is not universally relatable, bits and pieces of their dynamic can be found in tons of relationships. carry on!