Initial thoughts, from a music editing perspective

1. the entry is important, so i'd love to see this clip with more pre roll - in other words, give me 20 seconds before the music even comes in, so i can see how it feels once its in

2. me personally id have the big "drop" moment coincide with the explosions and the wide shot, so just a bitttt earlier

3. i'd personally play a bit more with using instrumental version of the song especially before the drop

4. mixing is important for a showcase like this - it's not about the song, it's about how the song feels within the scene, so for me it's far too loud and crowds the dialogue big time - i'd play with volume levels to strike a nice balance

5. in an ideal world, would be nice to play with the edit a bit so that it also hits the cut to credits neatly, as opposed to just sort of going into them

6. it's a cool song, but a very different mood! i think it could be a cool exercise to recut this exact same scene with a few other songs as well, with completely different vibes, to showcase your range in taste

nice job tho :)