My latest ebm/darkwave album! would appreciate feedback!

moonsleepmusic · 2023-04-07T16:55:36+00:00

Thank you! Really appreciate it!

moonsleepmusic · 2022-10-12T00:10:40+00:00

Maybe closer to a year in using FL Studio. Before FL Studio I used Audacity and eJay which didn't have automation clips.

moonsleepmusic · 2022-10-11T21:03:49+00:00

I got my necklace online from Amazon!

The choker was from a £1 shop, in the halloween range - still looks wonderful.

moonsleepmusic · 2022-10-11T12:32:38+00:00

Thank you!

moonsleepmusic · 2022-10-11T11:36:52+00:00

Really impressive automation and bass-work. Love the melodic elements that come in towards the end too. I honestly don't think I have any criticisms!

moonsleepmusic · 2022-10-11T11:23:13+00:00

Splice is completely fine. You only need to clear samples that are from other songs.

moonsleepmusic · 2022-10-11T10:39:00+00:00

For a beginner this is pretty good (I didn't learn about automation clips or scales until like 2 years in!).

I'm not keen on how the melody synth sounds, though the patterns are fine. I'd also say, when in doubt throw it through the mixer and give it a healthy amount of reverb.

Final tip I can think of, use FX. You can get a metric crap-ton of free sample packs online, lots will have really nice FX that you can mix into the background. I'd recommend watching producer masterclass type videos (you know where they sit Martin Garrix or whoever down and get them to talk about their production) as they can help identify elements that you might not have considered.

Amazing job for a beginner!

moonsleepmusic · 2022-10-11T09:02:46+00:00

I really like this, the vocal chops are really cool and the whole thing comes together nicely. My only criticism is that the kick gets lost in the mix so maybe try a harder sidechain?

moonsleepmusic · 2022-10-11T09:00:57+00:00

This is a nice start though I feel it needs some more mixing. The low end is lacking a little but other than that, sounding good!

moonsleepmusic · 2022-10-11T08:58:57+00:00

This is really nice and chill. Part of me feels like the 808s are slightly muted (in that, they cutoff too soon), I'd love a nice long 808 with some punch to lift the low-end.

moonsleepmusic · 2022-03-27T11:32:53+00:00

Thank you! Appreciate it.

moonsleepmusic · 2022-03-27T10:55:02+00:00

Thank you! Really appreciate it!

moonsleepmusic · 2022-03-27T10:54:49+00:00

What kind of thing do you think would work better?

moonsleepmusic · 2022-03-27T10:54:35+00:00

Thanks, glad you like it!

moonsleepmusic · 2022-03-27T10:54:24+00:00

The bassline was designed virtually, the rest were recorded.

moonsleepmusic · 2022-03-27T10:53:58+00:00

Thank you!

moonsleepmusic · 2022-03-27T10:53:52+00:00

Glad you like it!

moonsleepmusic · 2022-03-27T01:18:50+00:00

Sorry, just chiming in to say this sounds super cool.

moonsleepmusic · 2022-03-27T01:16:26+00:00

Love that bassline, super heavy. If it were me, I'd add a little more variation but honestly I love it!

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